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Sep 27, 2009 20:29

No boundaries
Akiya/Nao
See what he does to me? I , Akiya, is now a piece of Mozzarella cheese melting in a puddle.

It feels like I'm the only one in love. )

!kagrra, !fanfiction, akiya x nao

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granitemouth September 27 2009, 14:34:51 UTC
Ah~ so that's why it felt connected to the first one since Akiya sort of update us what has been happening in their relationship, considering the last one ended with the beginning, *w*

I like that~

I also like how you put Akiya's frustration in a series:
And in that span of time, we had gone on a date only once, hugged less than a dozen of times and the fingers of my hand too much to count the kisses we have shared. Pretty short of a time to be together but enough for many things to have already taken place.
Well written. I could almost feel Akiya getting pitchy in stress of his lover's little affection. D'aww~

The ending was open-ended for me, because the situation just might continue if Aki remains quiet or he could just be thinking selfishly. I think we are like that with people we love. ^^

Nice work~
MOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!

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asahisuperdry September 27 2009, 14:39:15 UTC
Oh, I think that means more work then haha.
Maybe I'll do another one, spotlighting on Nao, to let him explain himself :D
Thank youuuuu *hug*

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granitemouth September 27 2009, 14:54:28 UTC
Oh yeah~ that means more Kagrra fic to read XDD

Maybe you can do the Charisma x Christopher soon? 8D

*apir*

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asahisuperdry September 27 2009, 14:56:28 UTC
You kill me~ Try writing one then! XP

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tearsofbird September 27 2009, 14:50:45 UTC
ah, this was really nice! especially the scene where they left to elevator, haha. :D umh, sorry that i don't have anything.. wise to say. D8

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asahisuperdry September 27 2009, 14:53:32 UTC
It's okay~ Thank you for reading :)

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kawasakininja September 27 2009, 20:40:23 UTC
It feels like I'm the only one in love.

Ah, the first part brings little bit of sadness and feeling of loneliness but the second part leaves hope that maybe things aren't that "bad". It is sweet how little attention from Nao leaves Akiya skipping and all giddy and suddenly much happier.

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