Ah~ so that's why it felt connected to the first one since Akiya sort of update us what has been happening in their relationship, considering the last one ended with the beginning, *w*
I like that~
I also like how you put Akiya's frustration in a series: And in that span of time, we had gone on a date only once, hugged less than a dozen of times and the fingers of my hand too much to count the kisses we have shared. Pretty short of a time to be together but enough for many things to have already taken place. Well written. I could almost feel Akiya getting pitchy in stress of his lover's little affection. D'aww~
The ending was open-ended for me, because the situation just might continue if Aki remains quiet or he could just be thinking selfishly. I think we are like that with people we love. ^^
Ah, the first part brings little bit of sadness and feeling of loneliness but the second part leaves hope that maybe things aren't that "bad". It is sweet how little attention from Nao leaves Akiya skipping and all giddy and suddenly much happier.
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I like that~
I also like how you put Akiya's frustration in a series:
And in that span of time, we had gone on a date only once, hugged less than a dozen of times and the fingers of my hand too much to count the kisses we have shared. Pretty short of a time to be together but enough for many things to have already taken place.
Well written. I could almost feel Akiya getting pitchy in stress of his lover's little affection. D'aww~
The ending was open-ended for me, because the situation just might continue if Aki remains quiet or he could just be thinking selfishly. I think we are like that with people we love. ^^
Nice work~
MOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!
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Maybe I'll do another one, spotlighting on Nao, to let him explain himself :D
Thank youuuuu *hug*
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Maybe you can do the Charisma x Christopher soon? 8D
*apir*
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Ah, the first part brings little bit of sadness and feeling of loneliness but the second part leaves hope that maybe things aren't that "bad". It is sweet how little attention from Nao leaves Akiya skipping and all giddy and suddenly much happier.
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