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Sep 27, 2009 20:29

No boundaries
Akiya/Nao
See what he does to me? I , Akiya, is now a piece of Mozzarella cheese melting in a puddle.

It feels like I'm the only one in love. )

!kagrra, !fanfiction, akiya x nao

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granitemouth September 27 2009, 14:34:51 UTC
Ah~ so that's why it felt connected to the first one since Akiya sort of update us what has been happening in their relationship, considering the last one ended with the beginning, *w*

I like that~

I also like how you put Akiya's frustration in a series:
And in that span of time, we had gone on a date only once, hugged less than a dozen of times and the fingers of my hand too much to count the kisses we have shared. Pretty short of a time to be together but enough for many things to have already taken place.
Well written. I could almost feel Akiya getting pitchy in stress of his lover's little affection. D'aww~

The ending was open-ended for me, because the situation just might continue if Aki remains quiet or he could just be thinking selfishly. I think we are like that with people we love. ^^

Nice work~
MOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!

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asahisuperdry September 27 2009, 14:39:15 UTC
Oh, I think that means more work then haha.
Maybe I'll do another one, spotlighting on Nao, to let him explain himself :D
Thank youuuuu *hug*

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granitemouth September 27 2009, 14:54:28 UTC
Oh yeah~ that means more Kagrra fic to read XDD

Maybe you can do the Charisma x Christopher soon? 8D

*apir*

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asahisuperdry September 27 2009, 14:56:28 UTC
You kill me~ Try writing one then! XP

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granitemouth September 28 2009, 23:30:09 UTC
I'm planning on an Akiya x Izumi / Izumi x Akiya fikku~

And if that will be on crack, I have to be on one as well.

*maghahanap na ng pusher*

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