Ah~ so that's why it felt connected to the first one since Akiya sort of update us what has been happening in their relationship, considering the last one ended with the beginning, *w*
I like that~
I also like how you put Akiya's frustration in a series: And in that span of time, we had gone on a date only once, hugged less than a dozen of times and the fingers of my hand too much to count the kisses we have shared. Pretty short of a time to be together but enough for many things to have already taken place. Well written. I could almost feel Akiya getting pitchy in stress of his lover's little affection. D'aww~
The ending was open-ended for me, because the situation just might continue if Aki remains quiet or he could just be thinking selfishly. I think we are like that with people we love. ^^
I like that~
I also like how you put Akiya's frustration in a series:
And in that span of time, we had gone on a date only once, hugged less than a dozen of times and the fingers of my hand too much to count the kisses we have shared. Pretty short of a time to be together but enough for many things to have already taken place.
Well written. I could almost feel Akiya getting pitchy in stress of his lover's little affection. D'aww~
The ending was open-ended for me, because the situation just might continue if Aki remains quiet or he could just be thinking selfishly. I think we are like that with people we love. ^^
Nice work~
MOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!
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Maybe I'll do another one, spotlighting on Nao, to let him explain himself :D
Thank youuuuu *hug*
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Maybe you can do the Charisma x Christopher soon? 8D
*apir*
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And if that will be on crack, I have to be on one as well.
*maghahanap na ng pusher*
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