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[aruth]

My latest poem!

You put poetry in my palms.
You're so beautiful,
I want to shape you with my vocabulary clay.
But your essense is elusive,
Indescribable by my mortal means -
My hands can't recreate so great
A masterpiece of God's.I am really proud of the alliteration and metaphor...I thought I wanted to leave it how it is but I might work on the

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[inmycorner]

I got my friend's email:
Sanja Banozic Banozics@student.gvsu.edu
and mine is lebowl@student.gvsu.edu if you need it again.

Thanks so much, Ashley!
I'm excited :)

[meghan_mihasha]

=). I really like vocabulary clay. Also, thanks for the help yesterday!

[elforiendel]

**quietly, with tears in his eyes** it's beautiful Ash. i'm glad you're writing poetry.