Sex Pistol, Chapter Twenty-Two, Final Chapter

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Title: Sex Pistol, Chapter 22 
Genre: AU (Non Magic), Romance/Humour and MWPP
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters/ Pairing: Remus Lupin/ Sirius Black, Lily Evans/ James Potter, Alice Mayapple, Dorcas Meadows
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None
Summary: Punk guitarist Remus Lupin was never a big fan of the popular band The Marauders, but with a chance like this, how

Comments

[starlite_gone]

Aww! I was simultaneously excited and sad to see this pop up in my flist-- because more Sex Pistol! But also the end of Sex Pistol

[serenity_ca4]

Yay! You finished! I never doubted you for a minute. Okay, that's a lie, I doubted, but thank god I was wrong. This series (and your others too) are too good to abandon

[_jenc_]

Thank you so much for pointing me in the direction of this wonderful chapter!

I can't even begin to describe my love for this whole story... It has been an absolute treat which has kept me up both last night and tonight, way past my bed time, simply so I could read it.

Sirius's insecurity about his sexuality was poignant and although it broke my heart to see them part so acrimoniously and all because of a shitty misunderstanding, it was wonderful how you brought them back together.

Remus's vulnerability was evident throughout and you clearly know all of the characters exceptionally well in order to write them so brilliantly.

Sirius and Remus falling in love and both of them realizing that in the end, no matter what had gone before, they needed each other because of that love was absolutely adorable.

I cannot wait for your epilogue and thank you so so much for writing this and making me smile in ways you wouldn't believe.

*hugs*

[lizzy0308]

I know I commented over there but I love this so much I wanted to comment here too. I loved Sirius and James' conversation too! that was epic james telling him he had to get Remus out of the mess if he broke probation by hitting Sirius. The whole Sirius not contemplating if Remus still needed him made me ache. Great job. I love Sirius showing his sentimental side. I loved his line he'd give Remus an eternity of nights and how he refused for the night to mean nothing to Remus. That was so so beautiful. Loved that Sirius and Pete cleared the air. Nice touch. Thank you thank you a thousand time thank you for updating this. Absolutely fabulous. So so sad its ending but hopefully you can find time for more stories in your crazy hectic life. Great job. I don't know if you still want me to say but thing minor errors I saw were (and they really are minor): "but in the end, Siruis had been", "tended to consist of Sirisu doing most", "Panicking, Sirius grabbed onto this wrist" (should that be his wrist?), " I was tried because I

[artificial_ink]

I do so love your comments so I don't mind getting two :) Thank you for the grammar and spelling errors, you know how much I am a perfectionist. I wanted to get the story out ASAP so didn't comb it as many times as I normally try to do. Also, I'm a bit rusty I admit. Life has been really busy for me and I was sad I couldn't write and update the story sooner. First, I had to deal with my classes and writing, acting and designing for a show. That was...quite the experience. You see, I will act occasionally but it's not my passion and acting and designing costumes at the same time on the same show is a huge bitch. Not planning to do that again anytime soon

[amooz]

This whole story was lovely from start to finish. I loved the realistic portrayal of their relationship and how they get a new beginning from all th bad blood between them.