Sex Pistol, Chapter Twenty-Two, Final Chapter

Jul 08, 2012 17:47



Title: Sex Pistol, Chapter 22 
Genre: AU (Non Magic), Romance/Humour and MWPP
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters/ Pairing: Remus Lupin/ Sirius Black, Lily Evans/ James Potter, Alice Mayapple, Dorcas Meadows
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None
Summary: Punk guitarist Remus Lupin was never a big fan of the popular band The Marauders, but with a chance like this, how ( Read more... )

fanfic, james potter, harry potter, peter pettigrew, dorcas meadows, sex pistol, alice mayapple, sirius black, remus lupin, lily evans

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serenity_ca4 July 10 2012, 02:31:36 UTC
Yay! You finished! I never doubted you for a minute. Okay, that's a lie, I doubted, but thank god I was wrong. This series (and your others too) are too good to abandon.

Well, of course, this chapter was wonderful. I actually cheered when Sirius called Peter. Thank you so much for that, for letting us see Sirius actually grow up. I noticed too that you did the same with Remus, having him take responsibility for his own actions rather than placing all the blame on Sirius, but without actually taking all the culpability from him either. Well Done.

I liked seeing both of them, Remus and Sirius, not only grow in terms of their personal lives, but their musical lives. Sirius, of course, we see his development early on as he heads out to a solo career and producing, but Remus too in this chapter especially.

Their meeting up scene was great, especially from Remus's perspective. How many times have we been in that situation where we have all sorts of ideas how a meeting with someone is going to go, and then when it happens, nothing is what you expected?

and of course, I'm so glad they end up together. I was surprised by Remus's insecurity in it all, and yet it makes such sense, after all, if Sirius wanted forever, why did they breakup in the first place.

I have and had so many thoughts reading this and so much I want and wanted to say, but I could babble on forever. I'll finish by saying, thank you for your work, and especially thank you for introducing me to some wonderful music and bands that I never would have known about had you not put them in this story.

Now, how's Flotsam coming? *grin*

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