Fic: Art, and Other Dangerous Past Times (R for violence)

Jul 06, 2012 20:21

Title: Art, and Other Dangerous Past Times
Author: arsenicjade
Fandom/Pairing: WC/CM, N/E/P
Rating: R
Length: ~9k
Warnings: Violence of the criminal minds sort, so, gore-y and serial killer-y.
Summary: The BAU gets called in on a case Peter's team has been helping Violent Crimes solve. Diana sees an old friend, Neal, well, Neal finds himself in trouble, of ( Read more... )

fic, fic: criminal minds, fic: white collar

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winterstar95 July 7 2012, 13:13:36 UTC
This is all kinds of hurt in the most delicious way. You did a great casefic, mixed the two shows brilliantly and ended with warm comfort. Great fic!

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arsenicjade July 9 2012, 06:47:37 UTC
The fact that this casefic works AT ALL is completely due to my beta, who's a lifesaver. I BLOW at plot and she completely whips me into shape. Thank you so so much.

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forsweatervests July 7 2012, 13:24:30 UTC
Hon, this turned out so, so well, particularly the bits of case you had to push through. The other commentators are right: the contrast between all the relationships - okay, I can't write all the permutations of relationships out here - and the horror Neal feels for the case make for an even stronger fic. You should be incredibly proud of every single bit of this.

I still maintain this is the backstory for Nothing Can Resist. :-)

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arsenicjade July 9 2012, 06:48:19 UTC
You are probably right, re: backstory :-)

Also: everything people are saying is ENTIRELY due to you. On both fics.

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forsweatervests July 9 2012, 08:17:54 UTC
\0/

That's what betas are for - to polish up parts that need it and to push you to develop others. You're the one who came through on the writing; don't forget that element. With so many other writers these would not have reached anything like this. <333

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arsenicjade July 10 2012, 05:55:48 UTC
*forehead touch* Sorry I had to run today. There aren't even words for how much I would have preferred to chat with you.

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ivorysilk July 7 2012, 16:14:50 UTC
Loved this, and I loved how you portrayed Neal's terror and horror at the case itself, how abhorrent it is to him, but my favourite part is the meeting of Neal and Rossi--how Rossi totally understood him and was both admiring and amused. I wonder if Neal gets the tattoo removed eventually ...

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arsenicjade July 9 2012, 06:49:17 UTC
Yes. Yesyesyesyes. As someone who has tattoos, the thought of having one I didn't put on myself...oh no. He gets it removed. And Peter goes with him for Every. Singly. Appointment.

I adore you.

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ivorysilk July 10 2012, 02:38:44 UTC
OH I LOVE THIS.

(also, if you ever feel like a bookend snippet, I shall implore you to put this first on your list!!!)

(and likewise, and it was tres helpful to chat with you last night!)

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arsenicjade July 10 2012, 05:56:25 UTC
I hope today went better, kitten.

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frith_in_thorns July 7 2012, 18:57:34 UTC
This is really great, both the case and the character interactions. I love crossovers between these two shows, and I loved Diana and Emily being friends. And the OT3ness was understated and extremely lovely ♥

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arsenicjade July 9 2012, 06:49:56 UTC
Thank you so much! I hadn't actually thought about a xover between these two until embroiderama prompted it. All my best ideas are from other people...

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kanarek13 July 9 2012, 20:20:05 UTC
Love this to bits! An amazing combo of gripping case!fic and the h/c in the most delicious shape and flavor, with a lovely touch of Diana's backstory \o/ The way Peter and El were taking care of Neal at the end is absolutely beautiful ♥

Thank you so much :D

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arsenicjade July 10 2012, 05:52:17 UTC
Thank YOU for the awesome feedback. Glad it hit just right. *g*

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