[Fanfiction] "The First, The Last."

[sian_shoe]

Title: "The First, The Last," by sian_shoe.
Summary: Lyra Mahariel recalls her time spent with Tamlen as a child, friend and lover.
Rating: [T] for mild sex and violence references.

Comments

[zuelie]

I read this when you linked me to the FFnet version. I couldn't stop crying. I'm still moping. And every time I look up to read more, I start getting sad again!

How do you know my weaknesses so well? Romantic angst, and dwarf porn...you peddler, you! <3 Tamlennnnnnnnnnnnnnn. Gosh, you can just feel her life, so tinged with regret and beauty all at once.

I bet their kisses tasted like grass and blood :P

[edrissa]

Utterly beautiful, and so very tragic. I have very little brain power this time of day, so understand when I say sio;dfjsgvkldfgjsdkfgwerjfaek it suggests very eloquent expressions of grief, and sadness and how incredibly heart rending that was.

ILU.

[promisetruth]

I love you.
This was beautiful, thank you for writing it. This has to be one of the better pieces of writing I have read so far.

[signcherie]

Oh, no! This broke my heart. Lovely.

[baroque_tragedy]

Heartbreaking, and well-written. You did an excellent job with this piece, it turned out lovely. :)