*points to cookies in avi* I wish I could give you some of those for real for this! So cute and lovely, with just the right bit of UST from Lucas' side. I loved his thoughts about Riley and Maya (especially about Maya and the nicknames, so true!) as well. He would genuinely be happy for them.
Then the warm fuzziness of Farkle sneaking in, a bit oblivious (so IC!) but finally figuring it out.
Just a great fic, hon, and a nice addition to your GMW verse (it seems on the way to becoming such, anyway).
BTW, did we ever settle on a ship name for Farkle/Lucas? Larkle? Fucas? I like "Larkle" myself.
Hee! :) I'm glad you liked it, hon. As my per usual I'll be posting this over on the board later tonight. And yeah, I figured you liked the way he thought of Riley and Maya and their relationship with one another. And how he'd be happy for them when it changed. And as for the nicknames, oh gosh, yes! From the get-go that's how I've viewed Lucas's relationship with Maya. That those nicknames would translate into her own form of affection for him just makes sense to me, ya know
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As I said over on the board, I totally agree that Maya would use those nicknames as form of affection (or rather showing affection) for Lucas.
You've really thought about this, which is cool. It helps to write the characters as more 'real', when you understand more about them and/or where they are coming from, their headspace. I did get a sense that he was a Farkle who had grown up a little. He felt more mature but still Farkle, if you take my meaning. Very well done, sweetie.
Oops, did my comment end up giving you that plot bunny (and thus sort of turn this into a verse)? If it did I can't really be sorry as I do enjoy this setting and think more stories in it would be fun to read. The only thing is, I know you've got a lot of other fics simmering and the new one might interfere and if so, then that makes me want to apologize for my comment.
Larkle, as I said, is just fun to say! I agree. Larkle it is!
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Then the warm fuzziness of Farkle sneaking in, a bit oblivious (so IC!) but finally figuring it out.
Just a great fic, hon, and a nice addition to your GMW verse (it seems on the way to becoming such, anyway).
BTW, did we ever settle on a ship name for Farkle/Lucas? Larkle? Fucas? I like "Larkle" myself.
*HUGS*
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You've really thought about this, which is cool. It helps to write the characters as more 'real', when you understand more about them and/or where they are coming from, their headspace. I did get a sense that he was a Farkle who had grown up a little. He felt more mature but still Farkle, if you take my meaning. Very well done, sweetie.
Oops, did my comment end up giving you that plot bunny (and thus sort of turn this into a verse)? If it did I can't really be sorry as I do enjoy this setting and think more stories in it would be fun to read. The only thing is, I know you've got a lot of other fics simmering and the new one might interfere and if so, then that makes me want to apologize for my comment.
Larkle, as I said, is just fun to say! I agree. Larkle it is!
*HUGS*
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