Lost & Insecure (PG-13)

May 07, 2013 06:30

So, holly_blackmoor I finally finished my first Wincest H/C fic! :) Posting it here first for you to read. I'll post it to the board later tonight after work ( Read more... )

angst, wincest, h/c, love, brief bdsm

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holly_blackmoor May 7 2013, 17:02:30 UTC
Yay! You posted it, hon! And you weren't kidding about the whumping the boys took ( ... )

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ariafree May 7 2013, 17:39:31 UTC
Thanks, sweetie! Yeah, oops? LOL ( ... )

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holly_blackmoor May 8 2013, 17:22:56 UTC
Oh yes, the establishment of their bond as children was key. And having Sam being all defensive over John's treatment of him was great. I can see why you might have thought Sam hitting John would be OOC but they almost came to blows once before (that episode where they are arguing by the side of the road and Dean has to break it up?). Throw in Sam being pissed over how John is treating Dean and I think that would be enough to push Sam over the edge (along with his youth).

I noticed the "6" theme, figured it was intentional (yay me!). And I think you do a lovely job of mixing fluff with angst, sweetie!

Oh I've done weird things with posts while putting them up myself, so I understand. All fixed now, I see! And I'll have to check out the post on the board when I'm on tonight.

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ariafree May 8 2013, 17:45:01 UTC
Yeah, they did in Salvation. That was actually the scene I was thinking about when I wrote that part. Probably one of the reasons I kept going back and forth on whether I should have Sam hit John. But you bring up a good point about Sam still being young there. Yeah, let's go with that. heh

Yep, it was intentional. I thought about Sam being the one who was 26 but ultimately thought it'd work better having Dean be the one who was 26 since like I said because of the whole being injured so soon after "Faith". And part of it's an OCD thing. When I can have things be similar or as close to the same as they can be I'm gonna make it happen. LOL
Aww, thanks, hon! :)

Yep, got it all figured out! Knew it was just because I was rushed earlier that I would even have an issue with it to begin with. :P But cool, glad you want to check it out again over on the board.

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