On your shore

Jan 25, 2010 00:59

Title: On your shore
Author: ardvari
Rating: PG
Pairing: Original (Lindsay/Jamie)
Beta: princessklutz04, seriously, who else could it be?
Disclaimer: They're mine, and they're fictional!
Author's Notes: I haven't written anything in about a year. Nuts, eh? Ah well, the creative juices seem to be flowing again. YAY!

On your shore )

stories: original

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storm_8 January 25 2010, 10:16:10 UTC
I have to say I'm not a huge fan of long descriptions, but this is actually so nice...! I especially liked the little detail about the creaking wood of the staircase.

More of this soon...?

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ardvari January 30 2010, 07:26:59 UTC
I'm all about descriptive writing for some reason. :p

More stories are up. :)

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marygriggs January 25 2010, 13:16:40 UTC
A beautifully written slice of life. Well done.

Thanks for sharing.

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ardvari January 30 2010, 07:27:26 UTC
Thank you for reading! :)

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ariestess January 28 2010, 00:48:56 UTC
That was lovely. I've missed this pairing that you've created. The descriptions of the house and of Jamie were particularly lovely.

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ardvari January 30 2010, 07:28:10 UTC
Thank you! I've missed them, too. They were in my head but they sort of refused to co-operate. :)

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ariestess January 31 2010, 02:34:07 UTC
I certainly know that feeling all too well!

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authorw January 30 2010, 14:10:25 UTC
Love the way Lindsay stares at Jamie.

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ardvari January 30 2010, 19:10:58 UTC
Heehee, thanks!

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mingsmommy January 30 2010, 19:01:37 UTC
I am so sorry I'm just now getting around to reading. This is, as is your usual, gorgeous. I love how you take ordinary moments and infuse them with so much beauty and meaning.

Lovely, lovely, lovely.

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ardvari January 30 2010, 19:11:55 UTC
No worries, you don't have to apologize. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this! :)

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