(FIC) Holding on (Superman/Batman, PG-13)

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I got some homework done and caught up with most of the flist, so... here's some fic I wrote while feverish! It was meant to be Bruce dealing with the first white hairs for eve_k, but, uh. It got.. derailed. Sorry, Eve! It's still for you! I guess it just means I'll have to try again later, right? :)

Fic is set to Moby's Love Should, which is gorgeous.

Comments

[bradygirl_12]

So beautiful, Mina! This read like poetry.

The imagery was gorgeous, of storm and rainbows, of the here and now, because we only own the present, after all.

I loved Clark so happy that Bruce was never afraid of him, and this passage was wonderful description:

Without transition, he was kissing Bruce and twisting in the air, he was laughing and making dizzying arcs, he was free falling and staring into stormy blue eyes, always chasing the lightning in Bruce’s eyes, his unwitting god of thunder, his existence fleeting but powerful and imperious like a flash of lightning; sometimes an avatar of nature’s potential, sometimes nurturing like soft rain.

The use of language in this story is spine-tingling.

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Thank you, Brady! I'm really happy you liked the imagery. I have been hoping for rain for two weeks now, but no luck! I love it so, I thought maybe some rain-invocation with fic might do the trick :P

I think Clark loved that Bruce isn't afraid. It would break his heart to see Bruce doubt or flinch, but good thing Bruce doesn't think ill of these things :)

I'm glad you enjoyed, thank you for reading!

[yaoiloverrichan]

*gives her a plate of cookies*

Oh...wow. That was just... I dunno. I don't think amazing covers it. Maybe gorgeous? Goodness. Reading that... my breath caught and.. I'm so at a loss for words right now. It was just so beautiful! I was like snuggling under a warm blankie after it just got out of the dryer: perfect comfort. x3

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Yay! perfect comfort? I'm so glad you liked it! I really enjoyed writing it, I'm wishing for rain over here.. but for now, there's only rain of the fictional kind :P

Thank you for your kind words and for reading! :D

[carolandtom]

This was beautiful! The writing was awesome!

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Thank you! Glad you liked it :3 Thank you for reading!

[eve_k]

Mina´s writing again! *eyes light up*
And so heartbreakingly sad and beautiful this is. And all the lust for something larger than life that is in it too. *sigh*

I’m cold, so cold, and you don’t see me, don’t see my hunger, the terrible void, my love. Don’t let me fall, don’t let me freeze, don’t let me go…
What can I say, this line breaks me apart. How come you always manage to do that Mina? :)

As for the white hair fic, I´m happy to wait for as long as it takes!

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I wish there was more time for writing, woe! I'm so terribly behind with the flist and with homework and everything else.. *sighs* but I've been itching to write and hoping for rain, so this is what came of it :)

And all the lust for something larger than life that is in it too.

Woo! yes. I think the boys are after something grand, knowing that no matter what they do or who they are, they only have.. what they have. I might not be making much sense, but yeah! that!

I'm sorry to break you apart! I... am also glad? Yes, yes I am :) Always happy to be of service! thank you for reading, Eve!

[jij]

Mrow mrow mrow! What can I say, my whole day was happier because this appeared on my flist.

Clark shuddered, electric fields dancing before his eyes, each droplet a kaleidoscope, so easy to get lost in their reflections, in their molecular perfection.

Science! Sexy, sexy science...(entropy decreasing in a closed system! So wrong! So naughty! Clark and Bruce could totally make entropy decrease in a closed system with their hotness, oh yes they could...)

his teeth chattering even as he kissed Clark’s throat, shivering as he lapped at the water in the hollow of Clark’s neck.

The hollow of the throat is just...the most lovely spot in the world, and you make it so sexy, how Bruce drinks it in like he drinks Clark in.

Not too high, never too low, they held each other in perfect balance between the sun and the storm.

Just...little things like the difference between the "not" and the "never" there, and all it implies and reveals...perfect balance, yes, of course.

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*clongs* Kitteeeeen! aughhh, paaaiiin...!!!

So tired. So behind everything. So missing you. Woe woe. *sighs* Well, at least MD is done!

I really wanted to write something to share with you, either Eve's hair story or something to appease my rain desire -which is what this turned into! why won't it rain, Jen? why? won't it rain until August? damn the drought..- since the flist was so dead! so. I'm glad you liked this! Science! so sexy! I so agree about Bruce and Clark reversing entropy by hotness. They would put everything in it's place just by their sheer sexy.

I love the hollow of the throat. It makes me melt... so I'm glad you picked that line! it's one of my favorites!

Balance, balance. My S/B kink :P

*huuugs* I wanna write you! but I'm so behind on everything else! whyyyyy???? I hope you're well!

[jij]

I'm so behind on everything toooo! I am reduced to using comments to substitute for mail with you! This...might have not been the best time for an ljversaficathon! But I'm mostly free tomorrow so...maybe I will have something silly and sentai for you soon! :)

Balance kink! Not as impossible as decreasing entropy...we can always hope...

(And every sentence of this comment was either an exclamation point or an ellipses. Woe.)