(FIC) Holding on (Superman/Batman, PG-13)

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I got some homework done and caught up with most of the flist, so... here's some fic I wrote while feverish! It was meant to be Bruce dealing with the first white hairs for eve_k, but, uh. It got.. derailed. Sorry, Eve! It's still for you! I guess it just means I'll have to try again later, right? :)

Fic is set to Moby's Love Should, which is gorgeous.

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[starsandsea]

*melts*

*glomps you*

Bruce’s look of wonder, his seducing smile, the inward moment of contemplation as he savored pleasure like an exotic and rare wine; mapping soft skin and hard muscle, bones and sinews like the first time, like a last time. But Clark couldn’t really laugh or call him on it, he too mapped and memorized, hanging onto the feel of soft lips and whispered nothings that meant everything, tender caresses or fiery looks under half lidded eyes.

*hearts Mina's writing*

He couldn’t explain how much it meant to him that Bruce was never fazed or scared by him, how much it meant that Bruce could take it all in a stride and hold onto him while they chased the storm. He had tried to explain, of course, but words always fell short, the sentiment too big to voice.

*hearts Mina's writing again*

Without transition, he was kissing Bruce and twisting in the air, he was laughing and making dizzying arcs, he was free falling and staring into stormy blue eyes, always chasing the lightning in Bruce’s eyes, his unwitting god of thunder

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Always happy to share music, Star! :3 I'm so happy you liked this story! it was so much fun to write, especially since it won't rain here and I'm hoping for rain like you have no idea. Rain, damn it, rain!

I wasn't expecting for Bruce to be cast as thunder and lightning here, but Clark was very clear about his fleeting Lord of Thunder being put in the spotlight :P Thank you for reading, dear! *huuugs*

[ladybugkay]

The writing here is jewelled. It's adorned. There are images piled upon images, and it's just a giant feast of gorgeousness.

And then, of course, there is the added joy of Bruce and Clark getting it on in the midst of a thunderstorm. LOL

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Getting it on up in thunderstorm is what S/B is about! lol.. no? :P maybe not, but Clark's powers are so much fun to get crazy with, and Bruce doesn't mind at all, oh no. He likes the thrill :)

I'm very glad you liked the story! it was lots of fun to write. I want rain! I love it so, and I imagine Gotham is very rainy and foggy... outdoors sex to the max! :P

Thank you for reading!

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Lol, don't be jealous! you know once I finish school, my time will be yours for the porn writing. Yes. Something like that -man, I'm so sleepy!- I'll take over the world some way or another. Don't worry about that :P

I'm glad you liked this little story! *glomps* Moar should be coming to you.. eventually :P

[saavikam77]

*shivers* Brilliant! I love the prose here, so poetic and flowing. Just gorgeous. Vibrant. And the bit about being in the here and now - gods, it just makes so much sense for Clark and Bruce!

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Thank you, Saavi! I really like the idea of them understanding how fleeting they are despite being so.. larger than life in many other ways. I'm very happy to know you liked this! it was a lot of fun to write :) Thank you for reading!

[icarus_chained]

Oh, goodly gods, what I've missed! So sorry for being late, so sorry to have gone two(?) days without seeing. Oh my.
Soooo gorgeous. So beautiful. Images poured into images, and every last one as vibrant as the lightning you describe. Clark and Bruce in the storm, Bruce as a storm, Clark looking at raindrops and seeing atomic perfection, Clark holding Bruce above Gotham's cruel love, trust and fearing not Clark but to lose him ... So many beautiful things. So fluidly and gorgeously threaded together, the whole so much more entrancing than any separately ... Gods, you bring out the poet in me.
I am in awe. Pure and simple.

[arch_schatten]

So sorry for being late answering to this and with FB! I owe you tons of FB, and I'm so behind *sighs*

I'm thrilled to know you liked this! writing it was a lot of fun, I never thought of Bruce *as* thunder, despite of thunder being my favorite dramatic entrance for him -maybe from watching the BtAS intro far too many times, lol. The atomic structure of water was one of my favorite details to write in, I can see Clark getting in trace looking at things micro and macro... such an awesome array of powers.

I like the poet in you *grins* Write me death!Bruce and Hades+J'onn, poet Icarus! I waaantsss iiit! :P Thank you for reading, dear :)

[icarus_chained]

If you're behind, I don't want to think what I am. Take all the time you need!

The atomic structure of water was one of my favorite details to write in, I can see Clark getting in trace looking at things micro and macro
It was definitely one of my favourite to read! I love microcosms and macrocosms! I love the symmetry of it, the gorgeous complexity! I wish I could see as Clark does. Or Atom. The intricacies of everything small, the majesty of everything large, the incredible patterns that flow through and connect it all ... Oh, I'd love it!

And the poet in my is certainly trying. I'm working on it, dear friend. It will come, eventually!