I wrote this story for
taro_twist's birthday, but it got.. kind of out of hand, so I'm sorry it's so late, sis! you know I love you!!
Thanks to Jen, who helped me get off my behind and finish this, and for the beta! and for the love! *glomps Jen*. This is the third part of Quiet Revelations, a series of slow introspective unwitting seduction :P
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I love Captain Bee and his space pirate ship! :)
Very true about our earliest memories of childhood influencing us even decades later. And if you're lucky enough to have had a happy childhood, it's even better.
Alfred is so important to Bruce! Just like Clark, he could have been raised by the State but got lucky.
Excellent job!
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I do think that the upbringing we have helps color the world a different way. I'm glad Bruce and Clark had a nice filter to put things through -it gives Bruce something to strive for, and Clark a very stable moral compass.
Thank you for reading!
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So. Cute. Little Bee! Eee!
A helmet on the spaceship! ::giggles:: I love how he kinda seems to be defending his logic... even if it's his six-year-old self's logic.
Randomly, this reminds me of how one of my dad's workaholic friends... who you'd never think would even like kids... writes children's books in unreadable scrawl. XD
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Bruce will always stand by what he says, even if what he says is totally inane and was formulated by his six-year-old self. Besides. how else would you shoot a ship into space? Does Clark have any suggestions? I bet he doesn't!
Grumpy workaholics don't give the impression of being very good at children's books, do they? I kind of like to think between Bruce's imagination and his good hand with pre-teens -hit puberty and Bruce loses it, I suspect, but little children, he can totally not screw up- he did came up with some not quite inane and fun bedtimes stories for Dick :P
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I really like these; richly woven characterisations and a big thick slice of potential UST. Or just UFT, maybe. Ah, poor Bruce; all these good flu-plot fics banging around inspiring people and now he's gonna get cured into a woobie trope. XD
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The UST/UFT can of kind go either way right now, though I obviously side more towards UST... of the not too urgent and needy kind. If I have my way, they will sort of just.. fall into place.
I like my Bruce served woobie. I think it adds to the pretty -not that being totally badass ever hurts, but comics tend to cockblock me out of woobie most days. I get mine where I can :P
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I love how Bruce had this all penciled in to be a death-fic but Alfred was like, nuh-uh... Too much work in having you dead. You are just going to have to pull through and have this party because I already canceled one for you this month.
And that was that.
And Captain Bee is made of the win! Space pirate yar!
Yar, I say!
Yar!
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Space pirates, yar!! ...I must admit that's from my own childhood memories... I was Captain Smack, and I totally fought aliens and stuff! rar! no idea what kids these days imagine they are. Power Rangers...?
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Father has allied with Santa and there will be no Christmas on Earth unless we can bring the antidote back home! ROFLMAO
This is so so cute and I love this friendship aspect with the boys. I hope there's more coming.
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Santa and Father are a formidable alliance, capable of leaving little Bee without presents for Christmas. Unthinkable! At least until he's not sick, but a month of bed rest is pretty much forever, he's not having that!
I am working on the next part already! no little Bee in that one, but Jen has me thinking about a bunny for them as younglings, so hopefully I'll be able to deliver :)
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