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arch_schatten

(FIC) Somewhere to hang the secret identity, Day 5

Sep 30, 2007 19:58

I.. got a bit crazy with this one. Crazier. Ahem. Happy belated birthday, bradygirl_12! Not betaed, point, I correct (and give cookies, ask Jen!) :)

Fandom: DCU
Series: Somewhere to hang the secret identity
Pairing: Bruce Wayne/Clark Kent
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Bruce and Clark start e-mailing, e-flirting, and eventually, e-dating. Too bad they can't seem to ( Read more... )

secret identity, fic, clark kent, bruce wayne, pre-slash

Comments 59

wachey October 1 2007, 03:16:54 UTC

Omg that was so funny!! I'm so glad you posted this before I went to sleep!! I can't wait till their next chat session!

arch_schatten October 2 2007, 03:41:45 UTC

Yay, thank you, Wachey! I'm glad I could send you to bed with a smile :D

bradygirl_12 October 1 2007, 04:31:57 UTC

Mmm, so many goodies in this chapter, Mina! :)

Now I keep thinking of Clark as Angelic Bum. ;)

Heavy flirting alert! ;)

Truly, all is said lightheartedly, but these boys are dancing around each other in the mating dance. ;)

Great job!

arch_schatten October 2 2007, 03:45:33 UTC

Thank you, Brady! I'm glad you liked it! I'm sorry I was so late for your birthday :S

Clark does have an angelic bum :) ...so does Bruce, too! God bless tights :)

They are sort of playing gay chicken, seeing who backs out from the flirting first, but sooner or later they will have to realize.. neither is backing away, lol. Thank you for reading!

bradygirl_12 October 10 2007, 01:52:12 UTC

Late birthday goodies just means more birthday goodies! ;)

vespa331 October 1 2007, 05:16:54 UTC

Not betaed, point, I correct (and give cookies, ask Jen!) :)
Heeeey, I correct you all the time and I never get cookies! Unfair! I suppose I just wasn't putting enough effort in eh? Oh, you want corrections, you GOT corrections, it is ON...and you better give me some damn cookies.
one of the other rogue’s = rogues' (i think)
fries = freeze ?
Is not that you’re not welcome in Gotham = it's
To go or not go = not to go
I am ever glad to have grown up. = Am I ever glad
Hal started to yell and trash about. = thrash
You strike like the kind of person = strike me as
PD: What did commas ever do to you? = PS
do you want to subject to the = be subjected (though that might just be my love for the passive voice coming out)
I think it was a running gag of them = theirs
B^3 says: your do super-mother henning = you (or Bruce did a typo)
::Go Knights! is now to B^3:: = is now B^3
:: B^3 laugs:: = laughs
that’s how they sound like = how they sound, OR what they sound like

Morning, blue eyes.Awww. I was going to upload a couple 'blue eyes' songs ( ... )

jij October 2 2007, 01:58:03 UTC

I was eating dinner while reading this, and I literally stopped mid-motion; my brain got stuck. Braids???

I believe DaMo also stopped dead reading it and announced that single word. So I was prepared for it, but it still was...the brain cannot process. It cannot.

arch_schatten October 2 2007, 03:59:15 UTC

*grins* My teen!Bruce muse did anything and everything to drive Alfred insane. I always picture Bruce with longer hair before Japan, and Japan being the place where he... calmed a bit down. Gained some balance. But before that? oh, before that. Tehee! *wants to write so much, but can't*

I had such an odd day, kitten! I want to hog you, but I know you have to go to school... I need to go to bed, too, I'm still not feeling too great :( I think I might have caught a cold or allergies are acting up again or something...

arch_schatten October 2 2007, 04:12:36 UTC

Meeep! *hugs Rae and feeds her cookies* Thank you for the catches! ...I really shouldn't post unbetaed stories... :) thankfully I got you and kitten ( ... )

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schala_kid October 1 2007, 06:21:30 UTC

Bruce almost geting it on with Hal! Eeek that must have been hilarious! Also the only time Clark isn't oveprotecting Bruce and he complains? Geez Bruce make up your mind.

I love this fic, it's funny and entertaining and Bruce has Clark's baby pictures!

arch_schatten October 2 2007, 04:14:54 UTC

Bruce and Hal should get it on sometime! just to see if it's hot (It would be!!). Ollie missed it, poor Ollie.

Clark should have protected Bruce from the horny Lantern. I mean, what kind of friend lets you hang out with the known horny guy when you're trashed?

I'm glad you're enjoying it! Bruce should so share Clark's pictures...

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arch_schatten October 2 2007, 04:16:13 UTC

Yay! That's a lot of love :) Or professional respect.

I'm glad you like them! I hope they don't read weird all in one sitting, I've been writing in different states of sleeplessness :)