Comments | arch_schatten: (FIC) His heart's desire (PG-13, Superman/Batman)

arch_schatten

(FIC) His heart's desire (PG-13, Superman/Batman)

Feb 01, 2010 02:39

Soooooo it isn't Sunday anymore, but here it is my other WFGE prompt! I'm so sorry, requester, for being so late! *bows* I am the slowest writer! But I hope you like this ( Read more... )

superman, wfge 2009, fic, clark kent, bruce wayne, gift, batman, slash

Comments 41

limit_the_sky February 1 2010, 23:59:37 UTC

*incoherent flailing*

This was absolutely wonderful. I love the banter, adorable!Bruce, asdlfkjaslf just everything. ♥____♥

*flails some more*

arch_schatten February 4 2010, 02:02:12 UTC

Yay!! thank youu! I had such fun writing them, and adorable!Bruce is just such a teddy bear X) Thank you for reading, I'm so glad you liked this!

(Also I love your icon!! puppiesss!!)

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arch_schatten February 4 2010, 02:03:48 UTC

Thank youu! :D so glad you liked this, the banter was so much fun to write :3 And the tree! the tiny tree! I'm so gonna get Hello Kitty ornaments when I get my own tree. They are so sparklyyyyy X)

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

hitokaji February 2 2010, 11:15:59 UTC

*giggles*
Ohh, the villians' timing is always suck. Poor Clark! ;)
Thank you so much for sharing this with us. It was heartwarming and fun and Bruce was so adorable. This does help brighten up my day. :)

arch_schatten February 4 2010, 03:01:50 UTC

I know! villains know just when to ruin it for everyone! Clark will have a chance to get things back on track while Bruce does MD, I'm sure X) I'm very glad you enjoyed this! I had a lot of fun writing it X) thank you for reading!

skund February 2 2010, 11:21:06 UTC

Ooooh! I love your Bruce and his headspace. He's just so... I mean, of course he's write a best-match algorithm for the JLA secret santa. XD And I adore the random conversations they have about smurfs and words and everything. You really make them feel like men who spend most of their waking hours interacting. It's beautiful. And a wonderful ending.

arch_schatten February 4 2010, 03:08:31 UTC

Secret Santa's have a way of being crappy! vigilante_Wake recently posted scans of a JLA gift exchange comic and Bruce got a green tie and he's all '...', it cracked me up. HE WILL NOT PUT UP WITH ANY MORE OF THIS MADNESS X)

Smurfs and Starro! I have a strange love for Starro, he's just.. such a dumb character design, I love it. Writing the boys talking nonsense is a lot of fun, but then.. talking nonsense, as you well know, it's one of my favorite things X) I'm very glad you liked this! woot woot! :D thankk youuu for reading!

mithen February 2 2010, 15:13:47 UTC

"It looks like I just saved your... cantaloupes?" Bruce said with a half smile, his left eyebrow going up as he looked at his catch, bending down to grab the one that he was balancing on top of his shoe.

How much do I love the image of Bruce effortlessly balancing a melon on his shoe? SO MUCH.

"Yes! Of course I hate Starro. What, do you like Starro?"

The comparison of Banshee and Starro cracked me up. I had...never thought of Starro as a Christmas-themed villain. ONe more reason to agree with Clark's assessment!

No, it's a batarang. With googly eyes.

I loved that image so much! Actually, I loved the image of Diana holding it up and making the eyes whirl around and both of them howling with laughter...

"I don't really have that much to say about it. It's not an extensive charm."

Oh Bruce. YOU LIE. I so love him here, he's reserved but very vulnerable at the same time (of course, I think generally Bruce becomes more reserved as he feels vulnerable!)

Bruce moved in closer to him, and he kissed Clark, he kissed Clark, and ( ... )

arch_schatten February 4 2010, 04:52:28 UTC

I imagined Bruce with the cantaloupe much like.. a giant hacky sack! and.. the idea of Bruce and a hacky sack just blows my mind.

I can't help but think that if maybe Starro wore a Christmas hat or something... you know! he's a star! he could be Christmassy! I kind of love Starro, he's so absurdly designed.

Your scene of Diana and Kal cracking up at the batarang made me laugh so much! hahaha, yes! of course they did this!! Diana is Princess of Mischief!!

There is a point of vulnerability where Bruce just sits there and pretends to be a rock, I think. 'I am not here I am not here I am not here.' Haha, I just thought of George Clooney's attempt at ignoring the emotional crisis in Up in the Air, but nope, YOU'RE GONNA HAVE TO COPE WITH PEOPLE CRYING. Nghhh.

Thank youu for the help with this, kitten! :D :D you're the bestestt! and thanks to Dan too for the ornaments help! Dan is wise +nods nods+