Marshal!Bill and Miss Laura continue their search for justice and have lunch!!

Sep 19, 2012 08:00

title: Taking A Break
author: redrockcan
words: 300
A/N: The continuing verse of Marshal!Bill. The previous chapter can be found here Laura Get Your Gun. Many, many thanks to my beta defyingnormalcy who despite her crushing RL schedule always fits in my drabbles!! Hee hee and I love that I have a tag for this series!!

The enemy is getting closer, but first some lunch. )

series: marshal bill, author: redrockcan

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bsg_aussiegirl September 19 2012, 12:09:50 UTC
Oh, so cute. Laura and Bill are getting all starry eyed in the hay a lot this week.

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redrockcan September 20 2012, 01:52:45 UTC
Hee hee!! Theme of the week, rolling in ze hay with Bill and Laura!! :)

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newnumbertwo September 19 2012, 12:11:39 UTC
It was such a nice picnic too. At least they're together, lying on soft straw. They're both armed now, right?

Bill's not very discreet; it's adorable. ♥

Great update.

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redrockcan September 20 2012, 01:54:03 UTC
Thanks!! Yes they are armed and rolling in the hay!! I hope nothing goes off accidentally!! *looking at Bill* Hee hee!!

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defyingnormalcy September 19 2012, 16:46:30 UTC
Laura loosened her top buttons. She’d pinned her long tresses up on her head leaving a few stray strands wildly poking out here and there.

I am a fan of this look, oh yes, yes, I am. :D :P

I do love that we are really getting a sense of their ease with one another as the story progresses. It's a lovely slow burn and it's thoroughly enjoyable to read. :D

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redrockcan September 20 2012, 01:55:15 UTC
Glad you are enjoying Laura's look amongst other things!! Hee hee!! Phew where am I going from here... oh yes I am going up there!!

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hollywobbles September 19 2012, 18:19:23 UTC
Okay, spur-boy, now go away so they can use that loft correctly!

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redrockcan September 20 2012, 01:56:07 UTC
Rollin' in ze hay!! A must have scene in any old western!! :)

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ar90_bsg September 20 2012, 04:41:37 UTC
Bill's so cute when he's bashful. But canon has taught us that he's nothing if not willing to take a good look when he likes what he sees. And who can blame him?! 'specially when Laura's got her hair up like that!!

Now then, I think a roll in the hay is in order, yes? :P

EDIT: :( Now I've gotta wait with all the rest! Totally loving this series, though, so it's worth the wait. Can't wait to see what's next!! xD

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redrockcan September 21 2012, 19:53:15 UTC
Heh!! Bill loves ogling doesn't he? Glad there is some canon in this series!! :) Thanks for all your wonderful comments and happy you are enjoying this series. If I could just quit my job and write fic all day it would be great!!

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