Misfire

Feb 21, 2014 00:39

misfire, taekwoon & jaehwan, pg13, 19k+

To Taekwoon, Jaehwan was his star. To Jaehwan, Taekwoon was his silence

Part 1 | Part 2
warnings: [spoiler]disability

A/N: This is a fic I wrote for ForVixx Valentine Exchange, enjoy ~

jaehwan, ken, fanfiction, vixx, taekwoon, keo, leo

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heartclub April 14 2014, 22:59:56 UTC
hiya mate this comment is like five years late
but i'm here finally finally finally and i just reread it
again to be able to comment SO HERE WE GO GO

ok ok ok shit prescilla you know how i was afraid i'd be in pain if i read this yeah yeah FUCK YOU first of all because i'm still hurting
but almost i must tell you how much i enjoyed the way you started it? i feel like i really felt the calm feeling that is very taekwoon-ish
so thumbs up a+ well done!!! beginnings are always so hard i'm always jealous of people who manages ugh

your writing is fucking gorgeous too i need to tell you that too! it's not boring to read and it's not too flowery either yeeeeees

Telling the one person who loves company as if it were a drug that he’d rather sit in his bed reading all night than be here wasn’t particularly the way to go.

dunno but i like this sentence a lot

THEN THE SCENE WHERE JAEHWAN AND TAEKWOON MEETS U UU U U UGGGGG H HH HH

“Cute,” He said and Taekwoon lifted an eyebrow, thinking it was the first time anyone has ever associated ( ... )

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heartclub April 14 2014, 23:00:27 UTC
T: That you didn’t take my virginity? Or that I’m not ‘that’ anti-social.

SPITS OUT WATER JESUS FUCK

i looooooove how you make them communicate from all those questions it's really nice to read!!!!!

“You could always unstick yourself,” Taekwoon offered and slipped a spoon of rice into his mouth.

Hakyeon smiled, then offered him a wink. “Never.”

FRIENDSHIP IM YELLING GREAT FRIENDSHIP ASSHOLE BEST FRIEND BRILLIANT

J: Tell me, Taekwoon.
J: What scares you?

T: You.

AND HERE COMES THIS FUCKING PART I GOT FUCKING CHILLS UGGGGGGGGGGHHHHH

“The fact I can’t hear your voice.” He said and threw another card to the centre. He looked up to see Jaehwan frozen, and watching Taekwoon. They held each other’s gaze for a while before Jaehwan blinked away and weakly smiled.so many feelings in there so many feelings going through my body so Many Feelings my comment is ridiculous please don't hate me ( ... )

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heartclub April 14 2014, 23:00:35 UTC
With his eyes upturned at the ends and his canine teeth poking from the side of his lips, he answered, “Because I’m happy.”

no wait i mean now kill me now stab me in the heart im :(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( but also :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

taekwoon looked down at his phone, staring at the endless list of conversations he had saved with Jaehwan: messages they had shared in silence, texts they sent in the middle of the night, and notes that meant nothing but everything to Taekwoon. He didn’t think being deaf was all too bad thing, not if it was the reason Jaehwan was there.

feelings again i swear to god reading this is just full of feelings and YOUR WRITING AGAIN YOUR WRItING IM GOING to sAY thIS FOREVER ItS gORGEOUS
but then all the fluff turns into angst and this is the moment i lie down here and stare at you with sad eyes

But nothing at that point would have prepared Taekwoon’s ego, or heart, for what Jaehwan had said to everyone ( ... )

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