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cas74 July 10 2011, 06:21:13 UTC
Oh, I am so proud of Marcus!

And Im so glad Esca was brave enough to give him another chance. After hearing his story, it is understandable why he was so cold at first. I want to hug both of them!

What makes me so happy is that you have written so much! A lot of fics would have ended here, but there are still four more parts to come! So excited to see where you take this!

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aquila_star July 10 2011, 07:37:32 UTC
Thank you. :D And yes, Esca might have been upset about Marcus tucking tail after the kiss, but what he really needed was a friend. *hugs him*

And some people might think that sex fixes everything, but I'm not one of them. They still have lots of ground to cover. :D

Thank you! ♥

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sangueuk July 10 2011, 06:42:46 UTC
I'm thrilled you posted a day earlier than usual! Thank you!

I love this fic - the rollercoaster ride of emotions, Esca's defiance, Marcus' self-doubt and then how he overcame his fears. So well done!

And this line really resonated with me for some reason: He thought of all he would be giving up if he followed his heart, all the hard work and striving that would be rendered meaningless, all because a beautiful boy had skated into his life and turned it upside down. *clutches heart* SO ROMANTIC!

I loved their first time too - so sweet how hesitant Marcus was, and the inexperience is so hawt!

*loves*

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aquila_star July 10 2011, 07:40:47 UTC
You're welcome! We're leaving town at 7am tomorrow, and with my family and friends in attendance at my sister's bday bbq, we won't be done until way too late tomorrow to post. ;) Lucky you. :P

I'm glad you liked the first time, writing it was fun. :D And that line...I really loved it when I wrote it, I'm so glad you picked it out. Hee!

Cheers. :D

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archiecookie July 10 2011, 06:52:14 UTC
S:DFHASIOGYNAXLCVHNSDFUGOS\.

IT'S HERE! OMGGGG IT'S HEREEEE.

Sorry, but i'm a little bit excited :)

Off to go read it now!

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aquila_star July 10 2011, 07:44:02 UTC
Yay, enjoy!

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misspamela July 10 2011, 12:02:21 UTC
YAAAAAAY I have been waiting and waiting for this! So satisfying and hot, mm-hm.

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aquila_star July 10 2011, 13:45:29 UTC
Heehee, thank you so much. :D There's more where that came from. :)

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ladytiferet July 10 2011, 13:04:04 UTC
Oh, girl, you broke me utterly at the beginning and then made it all right again :)
It was so, beautiful, Marcus's strength and defiance, demanding respect! Esca was great too, overcoming his hurt to be happy and so, so deliciously bossy :D
Now they have to deal with their respective issues, but I'm sure if they stick together they can take everything on!

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aquila_star July 10 2011, 13:46:16 UTC
Heehee, I'm sneaky like that. Thank you! :)

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