No Regrets: A Knight's Brave Scar

Feb 18, 2009 23:32

Stronger, stronger still
powerful hilt
of willpower and focus.

A knight charges
bravely into battle
no regrets.

The moon shines on
an old scar
crescent-shaped like
the new moon
"A battle long ago
and I have no regrets."

Early phases shine down
and he smiles in pride.
"No regrets....no regrets."

poetry, no regrets: a knight's brave scar

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aquamarinepond February 20 2009, 17:58:50 UTC
Thank you! :) I really appreciate your critiques. One of the wisest things I ever heard was that writing is both a talent and a discipline. :) I have a thesaurus that would really come in handy...I also need one of those rhyme books. :) Good pointers! Thanks a lot. ^_^

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elfinecstasy September 4 2009, 00:38:59 UTC
Just wanted to thank you for adding me - I LOVE poetry and will be thrilled to read yours. :-)

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aquamarinepond September 4 2009, 00:57:49 UTC
No problem. :) Thank you! ^_^

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