I am applying to several library science programs for Spring 2011 admission, meaning my first deadline is in October. I have been working on the SOP for a couple of months, and while I'm mostly happy with the one found after the cut, I think it could be better. Please help, be as nit picky as you want, I can take it.
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"I currently work as an educational benefit liaison for veterans and I take great pleasure in assisting helping veterans work towards their educational goals by helping them navigate the application process to gain access to their educational benefits and providing information about other resources available to them." Very long sentence with a pile of subordinate clauses, some of which can be inferred.
Good luck! One of my best friends has an MLIS (she works with government archives rather than research university libraries), and she is very happy working in the field.
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Just this: "Currently, to prepare for entering a rigorous master's program I have joined the American Library Association to increase my understanding of [contemporary? Descriptor of types of issues you're interested in] issues surrounding the library world. I am a member of several ALA newsgroups[,] including the new librarian group, the library and information technology association, and an academic librarian group."
I'm at an LIS program myself (in part, anyway), good luck!
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