Take Heart (LJ Idol)

[appletreegirl]

She burst into this world with a shriek and a wail, as the blurry figures held her upside down and the sharp sting of a smack shocked her into consciousness. In her soul she knew that this was not the way she wanted things to start

Comments

[theafaye]

Lovely. And not something I should be reading when feeling hormonal and emotional!

[appletreegirl]

Aw! *HUG*

Sometimes all we need is a good cry and a moment to feel sorry for ourselves. I find that sometimes gives me the release I need to be able to move on.

[basric]

Beautiful entry. Well done.

[appletreegirl]

Thank you so much! :)

[xo_kizzy_xo]

Absolutely beautiful. And you're making me cry.

[appletreegirl]

I hope it's more happy tears than sad ones! *HUG*

Gald you enjoyed it even if it did make your eyes leak ;)

[superhappytime]

nicely written

[appletreegirl]

thanks!

*applause*

[beyond_my_smile]

I want to simply gush about this entry, though it feels like a slap in the face (simply because I can relate). It is powerful and well written. I can't wait to read more!

Re: *applause*

[appletreegirl]

This is such a compliment! Wow! Thank you and I hope I get to stay in the competition for a bit longer so I can share some more :)