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[apostrophe_ess]

Title: Am I stupid?
Author: apostrophe_ess
Disclaimer: Everything belongs to JKR, I merely gain from playing these games in her playground.
Pairing/Character: Lily/James and Harry
Word Count: 825
Rating: G
Prompt: For potterverse100, number 54 - food. Prompt table here
Summary: There are bound to be down days when there is a price on your head - aren't there?

Comments

[xprincessbloomx]

Oh that was beautiful. I could feel the angst in the fic. I'm a little teary right now. The emotions that Lily feels are really realistic and I really love your use of dialogue. :) And *sigh* to a teary James. ♥ Great work!

[apostrophe_ess]

I'm very glad this one worked out as well as it seems to have. I'm delighted that the emotions came across and the angst as well. Real men can cry! Hee hee. Thank you very much for your kind words.

[randomneses]

“He doesn’t know how Harry likes to be cuddled before sleep.”

That part KILLED me...seriously. Great, beautiful job as usual. :)

[apostrophe_ess]

Wow, lovely words. Thank you.

I can't bear to imagine what it must have been lie for Harry the first weeks after his parents were killed and he was looked after (barely, if at all) by Petunia. Did he get cuddles? Did she feed him? Was he left to fend for himself? Did he walk around all day crying because he needed the love he was missing from James and Lily? That poor little boy.

[randomneses]

I know. Poor Harry. :(

[guesswork_]

Quite a promise you made and quite a delivery to follow through. I like this. Keep writing...how many have you left for the Potterverse challenge? :)

[apostrophe_ess]

*grin* Thank you very much indeed. I'm really pleased that you liked this one - quite different, like I said!

Only 90 to go now. Or rather, in a few minutes, only 89 to go. I'm going to finish these comments and then post one for today. I've got another idea brewing away in my mind for the next one, which I hope will work out okay however.

Thank you again.

[contrary_lady]

That was amazing, luv. ♥

[apostrophe_ess]

Awww, thank you so much for letting me know how you enjoyed it. *big grin*

[contrary_lady]

You're welcome, sweetness! :)

[alex_c_potter]

Wow, that brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful ♥

[apostrophe_ess]

You're really great leaving a comment, thank you so much. I'm glad it worked that well - sorry for making you tearful though!