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May 28, 2006 17:28

Title: Am I stupid?
Author: apostrophe_ess
Disclaimer: Everything belongs to JKR, I merely gain from playing these games in her playground.
Pairing/Character: Lily/James and Harry
Word Count: 825
Rating: G
Prompt: For potterverse100, number 54 - food. Prompt table here
Summary: There are bound to be down days when there is a price on your head - aren't there?

Am I stupid? )

lily, james, g, harry

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ladybluestar May 29 2006, 12:37:47 UTC
I love the angst and reality here, especially in that the reader knows how short their time is.
I really liked James refusal to think about it,not because he never did, but because he knew that that road led to despair.

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apostrophe_ess May 29 2006, 13:15:46 UTC
I have a tendency to write Lily and James very positive and hopeful about the future, but they must have had plenty of times when they questioned that hope and felt more helpless and negative. Hence this piece - and perhaps one or two more to come. Thank you very much for your kind words, which are hugely appreciated.

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vanillacocktail June 10 2006, 19:19:04 UTC
Awwwww! ANGST! Its sad, real, Jeez you put it nicely. but still it made me sad do you write happy ones? ::Wink:: Nooo I wouldn't want yah brilliant writing style to change for anything!

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apostrophe_ess June 11 2006, 16:51:48 UTC
This one was an angsty one, you're right. I'm not sure where it came from, but they'd have had dark times - lots of them likely - so I ran with it.

Thank you!

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