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[changmin/yunho] baby and i make six [2]

Sep 19, 2011 20:33

title : baby and i make six
pairing : changmin/yunho
rating : nc-17
words : 11,313
summary : changmin's life comes to what can be described as a standstill in the years after the group is finally disbanded. he thinks he's got his life figured out when reality throws a curveball at him and forces him to reconnect with his ex-bandmates.
a/n : written for kpop_olymfics ( Read more... )

r : nc-17, !fic, l : one-shot, p : changmin/yunho

Comments 20

dentedsky September 22 2011, 17:12:53 UTC

Can I do a spot thing?! I'm going to come back and review.
Spot!

dentedsky September 23 2011, 04:53:42 UTC

OMG I loved this~~~! Lib, this was incredible and I adore your characterisations - they're in character but you've shown them at the depressing part of their middle age, when their careers are over and their new lives are only just starting. I can really feel Changmin's depression and loneliness and Yunho's desperation and Jaejoong's typical air-headedness. I have SUCH a hard-on for future!fic, secret affairs, love over long periods of time - garrrhh, this fic just hit all my emotion kinks! I loved the twists in it as well - I wasn't expecting the affair and I wasn't expecting the child to be Jae's either - but in the end it all made perfect sense actually. Such an incredible story and so well-told!

trish3815 September 22 2011, 18:32:07 UTC

I was hoping the little girl was Changmin's...I really enjoyed it.... love how Jae is the one that know's everything.... just imagine how the little girl looked like if she was his... and how he accepted her... glad Homin was together again....

blueplue_hotaru September 22 2011, 19:29:59 UTC

knew it she's jae's. the way the girl came unannounced just resembled more of that her father. well, i saw the resemblance there. kkk ^^
i love everything. really. aigoo.
and love waits. that's so right. ~_~
2 decades...*sighs*

there's something special with that one love you can't let go. because it can't let go of us too.

love this!

xxfergiexx September 22 2011, 22:54:24 UTC

AWWWWW this was so beautiful!! So much truth in every word. The story flowed so well, and that ending was very fitting. I loved this, great job!!

preciousyunmin September 23 2011, 13:30:32 UTC

Homin bond to be together *nodded

i want more homin for you XD/\XD

Thank you for this fic!!! <3 <3 <3