[changmin/yunho] just the two of us

Feb 14, 2011 01:36

title : just the two of us
pairing : changmin/yunho
rating : pg-13
words : 2831
summary : yunho always spends valentine's day with changmin and this year won't be any different
a/n : happy valentine's day ♡! homin exchange fic for simp_anna , i hope that it's to your liking! :) would like to note that the beginning of the fic is actually the end, feel free to ( Read more... )

!fic, l : one-shot, p : changmin/yunho, r : pg-13

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yuxo February 14 2011, 06:43:19 UTC
OOOOHH, CHILLY AND INSANE. o____o this is certainly a very unhealthy relationship lmao :x yunho's so fucked up. *_* but i guess that's what happens when you're obsessed to such a degree.

i really like how you started with the ending. the ending is always the same, we always know what the result is and it's not a surprise at all, it's just a different process each time to how it gets there. i can't believe you wrote this in like, 2 hours lmao.

dark and straight to the point, just the way i like. :D ♥

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apocryphalic February 14 2011, 07:04:52 UTC
LOL i am actually quite proud i wrote this in two hours *__* maybe i write faster than i thought, hm o.o although, i guess i shouldn't be too surprised considering...

:'D i love you ♥ thank you for always being so supportive and dealing with me as i whine about not being able to write T____T

also just really glad it's not too confusing because even when i was writing, i was just jumping ALL OVER the place going WAIT WAIT DID I WRITE THIS THERE OR SHOULD I WRITE THIS HERE???

D: you understand my brain best :')

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simp_anna February 14 2011, 07:22:36 UTC
omg thank you so much! ♥

i loved it. i seriously loved everything about it. how twisted yunho is, it's amazing. not that i want him to be that twisted in rl but here, you did a great job on his character, how he's just so creepy and yet, he's so, idk, he's so obsessed with changmin, so in love and it's scary. i loved how yunho can hide it though, especially to changmin but to the girl too at first, how it seems so natural for him to be playing this doubled-edged game.
changmin is interesting too. i mean, it's also very interesting to be discovering him both from the scenes where he's present (like the first one) but also, and even more, from yunho's point of view. it's both biased and unbiased at the same time and i liked that.

i'm going to see i liked and i loved about everything really because i did. it's just such a gorgeous text. i loved the fact that it goes backwards, this is a great idea and makes yunho's character even creepier and more mysterious. like, thinking him nice and then seeing him like a psycho would have been ( ... )

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apocryphalic February 14 2011, 23:43:42 UTC
you have no idea how relieved i am just to know you liked it, much less love it :'D skjgnksh seriously, as i was writing/plotting this, i scrapped two different ideas because i wasn't sure if they'd be to your liking! i haven't written much homin that isn't happy, romantic and fluffy so it was definitely challenging! in a good way tho xD

i remember reading about how cold yunho was to changmin when they first met because he's already had 4 teams split up on him and i thought, well clearly he has issues with people leaving him behind. yunho's so affectionate and sweet but i think he really could get obsessed and so fanatic about someone to the point where he might just do something like this and think that it's just protecting changmin. anything to keep the ones he loves from harm, right?

again, i'm just so glad that you liked this :') happy valentine's day and i hope next year on february 14th, everything goes well for you!

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simp_anna February 14 2011, 23:57:30 UTC
i'm glad you liked the challenge :) i love dark stories so much it's insane, they're fascinating. i'm really not much of a fluffy girl (though i do read and like your fic, i love your style actually, you write so well, i'm just bad at commenting) and paradise ranch is killing me with all the fluff that i kind of like btw (i think i'm just being biased because of changmin) um, but this is not the point at all. i'm sorry you had to work so much on this but i won't lie, i'm also happy you had to because i'm really in love with the result ( ... )

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apocryphalic February 14 2011, 23:45:32 UTC
dies lol, single awareness day, lols forever T___T

i know psychotic!changmin's been done before and tbh, i probably never would've pegged yunho as the crazily obsessed one but lately, i've noticed how attached he is to changmin, like severely obsessed :') it's sweet but i think if it wasn't yunho, then i might be a tad creeped out. but since it's yunho and i love him so much T__T it's just endearing to me sjnfskh

♥ happy single awareness day!

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cant_stop02 February 14 2011, 08:00:17 UTC
omg how do you do this idgi. such brilliance in so little time. i want your brain. >:(

in the section where he kills her off, i was so confused at first. i was like, WHAT, WHAT, IS THIS YUNHO WE'RE TALKING ABOUT HERE, WHAT. and then it got all freaky and my face was literally like D8 omg why. you sent chills everywhere throughout my body and sdkhlkg. just. wow. i really love this. i really wonder how far yunho'd go just to have changmin to himself. that is so scary but love does scary things to people i guess ;A;

“You’ll always have me, Changmin-ah. I won’t leave, promise. It’ll just be the two of us.”

it makes you go AWWWWWWW HOMIN! at first but oh no, oh nonono, after finishing this, i am just SHUDDERING all over the place like damnnn.

anyway. yeah. you're amazing. ♥ :') happy valentines day, libby!

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apocryphalic February 14 2011, 23:48:06 UTC
you! D: how's your fic coming along?! you still have a little over six hours :x by my count anyway, lolol and you do not want my brain T_T it's rusted and mostly useless, i promise you that :(

LOLOLOL D: yeah i know right? i was thinking, yunho would not do this D: sweet, perfect gentleman yunho would never bash some girl's head in and then stuff pills down her throat...except i totally could envision it in my head D: see, this is why you don't want my brain!

i think that for love, especially those that love to such an obsessive degree, you'll do anything for it/them. it's not at all healthy but it probably happens a lot more than we realize D:

happy vday :') ♥ and you're plenty amazing yourself!

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cant_stop02 February 15 2011, 04:59:36 UTC
i'm dying. it's turning out longer than i thought. ;A; and i really hate what i'm writing right now, this is bad :( and it's gonna be late UGH. T_T

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apocryphalic February 14 2011, 23:49:07 UTC
no! lol don't die :x

thanks for reading and happy vday :)!

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