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apiphile

Dick gravy.

Feb 08, 2011 22:19

Title: Sex Is Not The Enemy #2.1
Fandom: Original
Word Count: 599
Rating: PG
Pairing: Um. Cyclist/Truck.
Warnings: See above.
Disclaimer: what the fuck.

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Comments 19

tsuki_no_bara February 9 2011, 01:34:31 UTC

this is so, so weird - i mean, a truck? - but i really, really like it.

apiphile February 9 2011, 11:24:08 UTC

Hey, man, that was the photo prompt.

crotalus_atrox February 9 2011, 01:59:43 UTC

Bro, this is awesome. It has all the things I love.

apiphile February 9 2011, 11:15:21 UTC

Bike Dyke Inna Truck? Or you mean woman/antropomorphic nonhuman?

crotalus_atrox February 9 2011, 20:18:27 UTC

Both, all, the hissing. :3 I'm glad you didn't take it further, I think I like it ending there.

howifall February 9 2011, 06:38:30 UTC

I really, really like the tone of your wonderfully creepy narrator! How jealous of the bike! And, even though i'd love to read more (cuz i'm greedy that way), i think your ending is right, smack perfect!

apiphile February 9 2011, 11:14:36 UTC

Ugh I got so fed up with it, otherwise I'd have tried to at least get to the photo reference I was given for this.

wolfy_writing February 9 2011, 08:34:37 UTC

I really, really, really like this!

(I'm a big fan of person/vehicle in general, among other deeply weird tastes.)

apiphile February 9 2011, 11:10:36 UTC

Ah yes! I remember you posted my Hamster/Oliver MPreg for me. :D