Things I dun today:

[apiphile]

As Long As There Are RatsOur service is abruptly halted by an unseen obstacle on the line

Comments

[apiphile]

So travel on the bus when in London I take it? ;)

[apiphile]

Oh no no no Blackwall tunnel is understandable, that is CREEPY AS SHIT.

[alizarin_nyc]

that's so incredibly AWESOME. it's like a rap. i think you should rap it and make that an audio file. just for me.

i love this!

[apiphile]

Hahaha oh god TRUE STORY I once recored myself rapping.

And then I listened back to it, deleted the file immediately, and have NEVER TRIED TO RAP AGAIN.

[alizarin_nyc]

RAP THIS POEM.

Or I will get Snoop to do it for you.

[apiphile]

Can we compromise on Baba Brinkman?

[crotalus_atrox]

Our service is abruptly halted by an unseen obstacle on the line
this train was never on time

This is a really great sounding opening line.

I quite like the closing lines, as well, the:

just walk the tunnel toward the light
Keep breathing, London; as long as there are rats
you'll be all right.

Seems oddly wonderful. The rats charmed me.

[apiphile]

You, small rodents, and poems go together.

[who takes away the sin of the world]

[two_grey_rooms]

i don't think i can properly express how much i fucking loved this? because shit. i fucking love this. a lot.

[apiphile]

... well thank *you*, ms. :D

[unnecessary_]

I never have anything intelligent to comment with for your poems but I did read it and I'm now following you on tumblr.

[apiphile]

<3 Glad on both fronts, mon amie.