Comments | apiphile: [fic] I keep saying I'm not going to write a thing, and then I write it a day later.

apiphile

[fic] I keep saying I'm not going to write a thing, and then I write it a day later.

Oct 20, 2010 01:16

Title: Peter Gabriel Song Resplendent.
Fandom: Inception
Word Count: 3,731
Rating: R for violence.
Pairing: Arthur/Eames. Kind of.
Warnings: Graphic descriptions of injury.
Disclaimer: Belongs to Chris Nolan, I'm not making any money, written in direct reaction to gits describing a perfectly innocuous fic as "creepy". No, you pack of gibbering ( Read more... )

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Comments 44

myselftheliar October 20 2010, 00:27:36 UTC

Unnngh their banter is so good. I want another move of just Eames, Arthur and Ariadne, as written by you

crotalus_atrox October 20 2010, 00:53:10 UTC

+1

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I'm sure that one day, they'll look back on this horrifically violent attack and just laugh and laugh...

Anyway. I flinched. \o/

Eames nearly greys out from pain, and for a moment he feels sick, able to see only colours and not shapes. "You just broke my fucking leg."

"Ankle," Arthur corrects.

"YOU JUST BROKE MY ANKLE," Eames shouts
Loved this bit.

But his restraint, such as it is, is rewarded with a crack of splitting blister pack, and a white oval tablet somewhere in front of his mouth.
I WOULD NOT TRUST ANY PILL ARTHUR WOULD GIVE ME. to be fair, Eames is in a pretty nasty situation already, but.

apiphile October 20 2010, 19:20:40 UTC

He's at the point where he's offering to do anything in order to have a reprieve from the pain, I think deliberating over the pill he gets is beyond him by then.

marika_kailaya October 20 2010, 00:39:40 UTC

jesusallahbuddha i am duly creeped out. this is horrifying.

apiphile October 20 2010, 19:19:01 UTC

Cathartic, though.

swear_jar October 20 2010, 10:42:10 UTC

"All of this is for your own good."

SOMEHOW WORSE THAN THE SLEDGEHAMMER?

Arthur is really, truly genuinely creepy here.

apiphile October 20 2010, 19:19:32 UTC

*twirl* Yeah, because thinking you're HELPING by doing that is proper nuts. :D

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apiphile October 20 2010, 19:18:31 UTC

Nope. It's Arthur being a lunatic; something he has inside him and something he's been planning carefully, I imagine. He's become attached to his team and doesn't want anything to happen to them. I am not entirely sure what happens next - couldn't work out if Ariadne was going to rescue him or not.

lanyon October 20 2010, 12:32:15 UTC

OH MY GOD. Arthur goes Misery. Yes, I see how this is very, very creepy. Brilliant.

apiphile October 20 2010, 19:16:46 UTC

Ahaha I knew *someone* would reference that.