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tsuki_no_bara August 30 2009, 17:02:30 UTC
*incoherent noises that kind of translate into "why am i reading this and really really liking it, it is so not my kink"*

JESS. DEREK. WRITE THIS.

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apiphile August 30 2009, 17:20:37 UTC
Haahah. This is, um, quite dark even compared to the version we have already written. GLOOMY REMIX IS GLOOMY.

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stratospherique August 30 2009, 17:06:44 UTC
I WILL BE HAVING A LIE DOWN IN A DARK ROOM NOW oiklsd 09laifjlkjn nnnnnnnnnnnnngh.

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apiphile August 30 2009, 17:08:04 UTC
No lying down until you bully jess into writing this!

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stratospherique August 30 2009, 17:34:18 UTC
No bullying is likely to happen until I lie down in private for a while!

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apiphile August 30 2009, 21:09:09 UTC
Hop to it, you would not BELIEVE the rest of the remixverse.

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apiphile August 30 2009, 21:25:21 UTC
TBH most of the other stuff is quite ... it's dark but it's a different kind of dark. And there's Joe/Dan. And uhhh. Oh, and some really weird kind of non-sexual het?

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apiphile August 30 2009, 21:31:28 UTC
Depends on if it gets written at all, but if it happens I will remember to plaster warnings on for things like brainwashing, borderline non-con and so on, yeah?

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strangecreature August 30 2009, 20:32:04 UTC
There's. That's. *points* *re-reads*

Look, you can't say you're doing a DARK REMIX of Thursday, you guuuuys! That's redundant. Um. You can, however, continue with this. Please.

*STARES AT JESS WITH PUPPYDOG EYES*

Holy shit, love all the alliteration and the rhythm of this excerpt and creepy creepy Ryland. Gabe-brain is excellent. :-D

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apiphile August 30 2009, 21:23:41 UTC
YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE FANFICCING IT SO I COULD STOOOOOOP.

Jesus, the rest of this verse is so unpleasant if you're in any way invested in the original 'verse, and we just kept going - some bits are lighter but most of it's darker, some bits are just fucking ... CREEPY.

But yeah. STARE AT JESS. STARE AT HER FACE.

That just came on with the way Gabe was walking! It was really weird, it wasn't even going to be his POV but the camera thing turns out to just be his massively self-involved mind!

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strangecreature August 30 2009, 21:44:29 UTC
Yes, but I've discovered that fanficcing fanfic makes me queasy with terror, despite being very very fun at the same time! You would not want to be responsible for a Queasy Panda, would you?

I'm... kind of unreasonably invested in the original verse, but I would totally read a remix anyway because the combined power of yours and Jess's writing is epic and hella inspiring.

JESS! JESS! MIKEY IS STARING AT YOU!


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apiphile August 30 2009, 22:02:42 UTC
BUT YOU'RE SO GOOD AT IT.

Well we just need to poke her until she stops being reticent about it and the monstrosity is go, all over again (okay, I should probably stop being cruel, the lady has hideous block atm).

Well, Gabe has a messiah complex, that's kind of the core of his character as Jess was writing him.

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jumpthesnark August 30 2009, 21:14:29 UTC
I love that Gabe thinks like he dresses. I love that Andy is such a dirty little freak. I love Jepha, I love Ryland, I LOVE THIS PLEASE JESS AND DEL MAY WE HAVE SOME MORE?

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apiphile August 30 2009, 21:24:03 UTC
I *love* the way Gabe thinks. I may have to write more of his POV.

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jumpthesnark August 30 2009, 22:00:17 UTC
Definitelyyyy. Gabe should have a cult.

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