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[comment placeholder] year 2010

Sep 22, 2010 19:31

This is the comment placeholder post for all of the entries for Hetalia Minibang Challenge ’10 ( Read more... )

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A Ship in Harbor coconabanana October 2 2010, 12:29:36 UTC

Story by: inuyashacooks
Illustration by: meditta

Re: A Ship in Harbor franceismyhomie October 12 2010, 03:45:47 UTC

I really like how you wrote Feliciano in this. He still seemed like the regular ol' Feli we know and love... but iunno, he had a deeper side to him? Lol I can't explain it. And I really like how you wrote Gilbert. He sounded like such an ass, but I loved it all the same :3

Re: A Ship in Harbor inuyashacooks October 12 2010, 12:54:21 UTC

:D thank you! i was trying for...a guess a more realistic feliciano? it's kinda hard to write him crying and getting naked every five seconds in an AU (no matter how much i may love him that way XD). but either way thank you, im glad you liked the way everyone was written!

Re: A Ship in Harbor faerichylde October 12 2010, 05:31:36 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAAH WTF THIS WAS WAY TOO OSSIM. and lol you had prussia call germany "bro-yo". THAT'S WHAT I CALL MY BROTHER LMAO. and seriously, ive told you before, but your germany; he's just so fucking awesome, the way you write him. he doesnt get anything, doesn't get people so he thinks they're all wrong and he's always right. and gilber, fucking jesus i love him. i mean i always did, but he's like those parents who work to take care of their kids and later in life their kids look down on them; i felt hella bad for him :( and FELICIANO HOMYGOD THE GENIUS IN HIM. he was definitely partly defined by how ludwig saw him, but there was a huge spark of sunlight in him too; and lmao you used "sunshine car wreck" again, I REMEMBER THAT.

and fuuuuuuu i knew you were gonna end it like that, but i was hoping you wouldnt, lol XD

ANYWAY I'M RAMBLING BUT THIS WAS SO FRICKEN AWESOME IDEK.

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Another Gilded Age coconabanana October 2 2010, 13:17:15 UTC

Story by: anti_climate
Illustration by: jean_wired

Re: Another Gilded Age franceismyhomie October 12 2010, 03:46:39 UTC

Gah, I loved the ending. Is Lucy a real name for a drug? lol I have no idea /is totally clueless.

But I really liked this story ^^

Fear Itself coconabanana October 2 2010, 13:46:42 UTC

Story by: Undone_reading
Illustration by: chromaticwish

Fighting Dreamers coconabanana October 2 2010, 15:06:52 UTC

Story by: didgeridoodle
Illustration by: katamanda

Re: Fighting Dreamers kupodesu October 12 2010, 12:53:39 UTC

I loved this! The little friendship between Australia and America - how they dealt with the bunyip and how America names him <3 - it was just precious. Special points, I think, also goes to how you described the landscape. I could feel myself drying out there in the outback along with America 8) The bitty!nations were adorable, and so adventurous and their friendship charmed me so much!

Re: Fighting Dreamers faerichylde October 13 2010, 00:42:21 UTC

FFFFFFFFFFFF KEEEEEEN HOW CAN YOU BE SO AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEE

seriously dude this was FUCKING AWESOME. I CAN'T BELIEVE IT. your america is the greatest america EVARRRRRRRRRRRR and your australia! when i got to the part where he appeared i was like "could it be....?" and then i was like "nah knowing him it totally is" and I WAS RIGHT. duuuuuuuuuude so amazing. you are just fabulous.

Funeral Pyre coconabanana October 2 2010, 15:17:43 UTC

Story by: qualapec
Illustration by: mcmitters

Re: Funeral Pyre franceismyhomie October 13 2010, 23:48:44 UTC

I...I don't have words to describe how absolutely amazing this story was. There were so many lines in this that just leapt at me and made me want to cry and broke my heart...good God - Canada! I admit, reading about the Hounds attacking Canada, my heart went out to my dear nation.

Gosh, I've never been so incoherent like I am right now. I suddenly really want to read Fahrenheit 451.

But whoa, this was amazing.

Re: Funeral Pyre pinkcatsy October 16 2010, 02:09:14 UTC

When Canada was dying, I was surprisingly not crying (because I'm Canadian and all). But once I read about Prussia crying out, the tears started and then stopped around the time that Arthur was watching Canada die a second time, or the thoughts that followed that. But then, again when Arthur was thinking about Matthew, I started to cry again.

This story was simply amazing. And, simultaneously, broke my heart. I couldn't stop reading once I had started.