This Is Your Life: Chapter Twenty-Three

[aoitsukikage]

Sanji was reminded rather forcibly why he hated clubs.

Sure, he loved to flirt with women, but there was a difference between them blushing and giggling and them attempting to get into his pants.

Literally get into his pants, in the case of the current black-haired beauty who had stumbled over after only

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[huang_yin]

/cheers \o/!!

I love how the dialog is executeeeed. It's so lovely :D And yay! Make-up scene XD Thank you so much for the update! I'm going to be so depressed when this thing ends ):

Don't worry about the update :> Keep doing what you do, hope to see the new chapter in the near future :D

[aoitsukikage]

Thanks! Dialogue is always my strong point, it seems, so I enjoy when I can write a lot of it!

And I'll start work on the next chapter as soon as I can :D

[theotherdenise]

I thought the conversation with Law was great, and it was a really strong chapter overall. Probably because you're so good with dialogue. :D

And it's good to see them make-up XD

[aoitsukikage]

Thanks! I was worried it would be too much dialogue, but I think it says what it needed to! And I've been wanting to get Law in for a while because I can't really think of any modern AU fics that use the Supernovae, so I finally found a way xP

[amy_dino]

I'm in love with Law~

And I'll miss ya next week ! Write us a good chapter 24, okay ? :D

[aoitsukikage]

Haha, I'm a little in love with Law myself ♥

I'll try! Hopefully my muse wakes up soon *prods muse*

[amy_dino]

I'm gonna kick your muse's ass if it doesn't wake up ; don't worry~

Last Friday was a bit empty without my usual fix (I'm a yaoi addict, and (un?)fortunately, there's no way to cure me), but I hope you'll be back soon with the story ^.^

Anyway, yeah, I was just rambling~

[aoitsukikage]

My muse is suffering from my work schedule >.<

Aw, I'm sorry :( I usually don't post WIPs because I'm always afraid my posting will catch up to my writing, but I thought I had enough of a head start with this one!

I have a few ideas, though, so hopefully they'll get written soon!

[hakutenshi]

can't wait to read the next one *Q*
I read this fic almost in one go, from the day before yesterday to yesterday and whoaaa~ great one *Q*
Thanks to you I'm a Kaku and Lucci fan now!! XD those two are great and I hope in the end everything will work out for them >o< Poor Kaku Q~Q

And you put Law in there as well *Q* gawd, I love you XDDD

and whoho! Thank you! You got me to like Faber Drive, those guys are pretty awesome!! XD

[aoitsukikage]

Ack, I've never read my fic through so I have no idea how the chapters mesh together! I'm glad it's working, though xP

Kaku and Lucci deserve more fans. Well, I've always had a soft spot for Kaku (and giraffes in general) and Lucci's really grown on me as a character through watching his progression in the series and the subsequent cover-story pages. I really hope they show up again at Marine HQ.

Haha, yay! Lots of people seem to like Law (myself included) so I tried to find a way to fit him in!

I like Faber Drive. I've had like tons of chances to see them, except it never works out. But I've heard a few of their songs and I like their music :)

[hakutenshi]

well, from time to time I think I overread something or so since there was a place change here and there and I didn't get it at first but that's okay with such a long fic XD

THEY DO >o< I don't know why but I have a soft spot for Kaku as well XD I really can't tell the reason but he's just... cute, somehow XD And Lucci's funny XD
And I still think that Kaku fits best to the Straw Hats

oh yes, Law *Q*

yeah, they're cool :D I like their album pretty much!

[aoitsukikage]

I tried to keep everything tied together when I was writing, but since this story has been going on-and-off for eight or nine months now I'm sure some things have been overlooked on my part xP

See, Kaku would work with the Straw Hats because he already works with fairly crazy people (and is a decent mediator) so he'd fit in there. Of course, he'd probably think of himself as the only sane one, but he has his quirks XD

[dndr310]

it's funny! i reeeaaaally love your writings! I'm your fan now :D