Love's Sorrow Chapter 2

[aoi_jihyo]

Title: Love's Sorrow
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[shine_xd]

aww~ why didn't i note this sooner?
it's all my fault TOT~

can't wait for next chapter XD~

[aoi_jihyo]

I'm happy you liked it! I'll work hard, just came back from work *stupid 12 hours of my life*

Thank you again

[aoi_jihyo]

Poor Jae baby ;_; I too feel sad for him, but I'm happy you read it tho, I hope can do something to make JJ less hurt

[yslover49]

i love yoosu so i can't wait to see yoochun and junsu together,
but i also feel bad for jae, T_T

[aoi_jihyo]

Is so sad ;_;

I always write fluffy stuff so I wanted to try something else with this and the 3shots, I hope I can be able make everyone happy at the end *cuz I hate sad endings*
Weird because I read was really angst fics but for some reason I cannot write them myself

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[missyoosu]

Hmm...I think if you change the summary just a little bit, then you might be able to get more readers. Perhaps if you mention that Yoochun is Junsu's brother-in-law.

[aoi_jihyo]

I hate summaries, I'll change it, they are so hard to think of ^^

[missyoosu]

Think of summaries this way: If you had to tell someone what chapter 1 and chapter 2 was about, what would you tell them? And that could be your summary.

Here's a sample: When Junsu bumped into a man on the streets of Seoul, he had no idea this handsome stranger was his older brother Jaejoong's husband. Junsu wanted him and he knew that it was wrong to desire his own brother-in-law. No matter how much he tried not to think about it, there was that little voice inside his head telling him otherwise. He was sick of them. (those voices?? or Jaechun??)

[missyoosu]

Hey, out of curiosity, did you get more readers after changing the summary?

[jihae_shii]

ohohoho that wonderful night will have some serious consequences D: and yeah, i can feel the doom on jaechun's marriage D: thanks for the update bb!!!! XDDD~

[aoi_jihyo]

Poor Jaechun, but the story must go on kekeke.
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