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missyoosu September 5 2011, 02:02:36 UTC
Hmm...I think if you change the summary just a little bit, then you might be able to get more readers. Perhaps if you mention that Yoochun is Junsu's brother-in-law.

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aoi_jihyo September 5 2011, 02:48:08 UTC
I hate summaries, I'll change it, they are so hard to think of ^^

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missyoosu September 5 2011, 05:27:56 UTC
Think of summaries this way: If you had to tell someone what chapter 1 and chapter 2 was about, what would you tell them? And that could be your summary.

Here's a sample: When Junsu bumped into a man on the streets of Seoul, he had no idea this handsome stranger was his older brother Jaejoong's husband. Junsu wanted him and he knew that it was wrong to desire his own brother-in-law. No matter how much he tried not to think about it, there was that little voice inside his head telling him otherwise. He was sick of them. (those voices?? or Jaechun??)

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missyoosu September 23 2011, 04:11:56 UTC
Hey, out of curiosity, did you get more readers after changing the summary?

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aoi_jihyo September 23 2011, 20:21:22 UTC
YES!!!

thank you so much ^^

Is just that I didn't want to reveal much, but sometimes people need to know so they get curious. Anyways, thank you a lot ^^
I hope that I can get more readers in the future ^^

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missyoosu September 24 2011, 03:41:22 UTC
Oh, good. I'm happy for you!

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