Title: A Taste of Normality
Genre: Humour / Romance
Pairing: Watanuki/Doumeki
Rating: PG13 / T
Notes: Takes place a few months after “
Dreams and Realities”, though you could probably read it as a stand-alone, too. For this particular story, I'll have to give my eternal love and praise to my lovely betas, Beboots and Product Of A Sick Society,
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Brilliant as usual! I don't think your Doumeki is ooc at all.
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Doumeki being a demanding bottom is the only way I can see him, but maybe it's because that's his attitude towards food ("Feed me!"). ;)
Oh, goody. It came to a point where I didn't know what else to change to make in-character. ^^U
Thanks for reading!
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And the end just made me go "AWWWW~!" Out loud, too. Which is a risk considering it's past midnight. ^_^;;
I don't think they were too out of character. Anyway, they were believable enough that my fangirly giggles kicked in. Darn those...they always make me look like a nasty perv at the worst moments... >_>
Good job, anyway :3
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The end is what convinced me that it was worth trying to fix this story instead of sticking it in the "shall never see the light of day" folder. that's one part that barely saw any changes since its first version. :)
Ah, the fangirly giggles... yeah, I know what you mean. I'm happy I was able to pull such reactions out of you. :3
Thanks for reading, and for telling me what you thought of it! I honestly couldn't tell what was good and what was bad any longer.
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♥ This really is awesome, thanks for sharing!
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So there finally is some Doumeki under the Doumeki skin? It was about time... if I were to show you the first version of this fic, you would otice just how much I had to change him to make him in-character. ^^U
Thanks for reading, and for the review love! :3
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I think Doumeki can be perfectly chatty about certain things. It's not as if he never speak more than four words at a time. Hasn't he given long (long for him, anyway) explanations relating to his grandfather? You wrote him wonderfully, at any rate.
You're very welcome! Haha, I enjoy leaving you reviews :)
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This isn't necessarily a good thing. It's one of the main reasons it takes so long for me to upload a new story. ^^U
Yeah, at times he can be somewhat wordy, as long as he isn't angry. The angrier he gets, the less he speaks. He doesn't seem to be so good at controlling his feelings... the very few that he experiences. XD
I love that icon, btw. I can't help but think it's illustrating the kiss in this story, since they're both kind of smiling, and the pose fits, too... X3
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All the titled Watanuki got made me laugh, in all it was a great read.
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Well, Watanuki was arguing semantics, so Doumeki thought he might be helpful and provide some gender-appropriate titles. ;D
Thanks for reading!
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Thank you for sharing this!
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Thanks for reading! :)
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