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loki_lee September 20 2009, 12:50:17 UTC
Brilliant. I loved how you told it from Akari's perspective, also how you compared 'what might have happened' and what did happen. There are rarely times when fact is more interesting than fiction... but Akari-chan's imagination more than makes up for it. Short but Great read. Thankyou.

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anonymous September 20 2009, 15:17:41 UTC
I loved it, especially the last line.

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anonymous September 20 2009, 19:34:32 UTC
I adore this. It's a great little read, and I love the multiple perspectives on Akari's life.

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ranuel September 20 2009, 20:11:52 UTC
This may be the best Akari story I've ever read. I love that you make her so strong and complex.

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stirring_still September 20 2009, 21:09:12 UTC
This is brilliant. Really good stuff. Lovely juxtaposition of external expectations, gender roles, and cultural shifts, all in one strongly-portrayed character.

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