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[Iwata]

Sep 20, 2009 00:07

by macey_muse

( Akari no Shousetsu )

round 008, sub: macey_muse

Comments 10

issen4 September 21 2009, 04:16:19 UTC

I like the focus on Akari and the way you explore how paths in her life could have gone. The last line's the best.

anonymous September 22 2009, 19:42:12 UTC

I like your Akari. *smiles* Nice.

Tahara

anonymous September 22 2009, 23:43:22 UTC

Love this! Great take on Akari.

flonnebonne September 30 2009, 02:35:02 UTC

I really liked this! You packed a lot into a short fic. Really interesting stuff going on here.

lacygrey October 19 2009, 13:41:19 UTC

I love your emancipated Akari! Thank you.
And the format with the different, progressively brightening, scenarios of the same situation.

Akari isn’t her mother. She wasn’t born in the fifties

In a way I suppose Akari's 'mother' - meaning Yumi Hotta - really was born in the fifties.