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Sep 16, 2006 20:48

TWO BY FOUR
by flonnebonne

( [vijf] Two by Four )

round 001, sub: flonnebonne

Comments 16

issen4 September 17 2006, 08:30:11 UTC

This is hilarious. I love the dialogue--the tone's just the right touch (hee!) of deadpan.

flonnebonne September 25 2006, 09:03:38 UTC

Mreow! I forgot to answer all the comments here on answer_key. Anyway, thank you. :)

(You sure commented on a lot of the fics with your real identity!)

qem_chibati September 17 2006, 10:33:39 UTC

I cackled! =D

I loved the dialogue between Isumi and Hikaru; with Hikaru being very calm about the whole thing, and ever so helpfully responding to Isumi's woes.

flonnebonne September 25 2006, 09:04:58 UTC

*cackles with you* Poor Isumi...he never knew he was a cradle robber at heart, though come to think of it Waya is only a year older than Hikaru.

goldenrat84 September 17 2006, 11:42:17 UTC

Though this hurts my Hikaru/Akira shipping heart, this fic kinda makes me want to go out and find a Hikaru/Isumi fic.
The dialogue between everyone was top-notch. Isumi's voice was just too fun and reasonably IC.

flonnebonne September 25 2006, 09:07:24 UTC

Thank you! And don't worry, the Hikaru/Akira ship will never sink.

I'm pretty sure that nary a Hikaru/Isumi fic exists, nor a Touya/Waya one, which is why I wrote this fic. But if ever find one, please share it with the world. :)

anonymous September 17 2006, 22:26:50 UTC

I noticed that Shindo didn't say anything about HIS virginity! XD Though it implies something about poor Isumi and Waya having never erm .... XD I love the reverse implications as well.

Cute is not the word I'm looking for, but hilarious definitely is. I'm go with hilariously charming! ^_^

flonnebonne September 25 2006, 09:09:45 UTC

Hee, I'm not sure how much I meant to imply about the boys' sex lives or lack thereof...it's totally up to the reader. :)

Glad you liked!

anonymous September 18 2006, 11:37:54 UTC

I'm amused as hell at how Hikaru and Akira don't freak out as much as Isumi and Waya did when they found out what they did. :D And they immediately assumed something happened - well, it depends how you look at it, I guess? XD

flonnebonne September 25 2006, 09:12:35 UTC

Glad you enjoyed! I think I wrote the boys' reactions that way because Hikaru and Akira have very active sex lives in fandom, whereas Isumi and Waya don't get as much love, poor things. And also because of the age role-reversal thing, of course.