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Sep 16, 2006 19:38

POMEGRANATES ~A STORY IN FOUR SEASONS~
by ukefied

[shanti] Pomegranates ~A Story in Four Seasons~ )

round 001, sub: ukefied

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qem_chibati September 17 2006, 08:09:08 UTC
It was very interesting watching this fic progressed. I liked the theme of the seasons you incorporated.

I wasn't sure Kimihiro was at first, I had to scroll down a bit to double check, but it actually makes the fic feel more natural referring to the character by his first name rather than his sur.

It was definetly very meaniful and beautifully done, when you had him switch between using Kaga's surname, to his first.

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qem_chibati September 17 2006, 08:09:57 UTC
*Er I wasn't sure who Kimihiro was at first; I knew he had to be one of Hikaru's friends from midschool but it didn't quite click straight a way.

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goldenrat84 September 17 2006, 10:55:50 UTC
Nice fic. I really like the way the progression of their relationship was show through the different seasons. Tsutsui is such a cutie, I love reading fics about him.

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anonymous September 19 2006, 04:27:06 UTC
KAGA/TSUTSUI. Beautiful progression and extra points for mentions of Greek mythology! I love how Kaga is so matter-of-fact on an issue that has Tsutsui so agitated. They are ridiculously cute and make me marvelously happy. Thank you so much for writing this. ♥

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aubergineautumn April 25 2007, 01:30:49 UTC
fabulous story, really well written. You don't see this pairing that much, but you outline their personalities (especially Kaga's) so crisply, this story feels natural.

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nighteevee January 16 2008, 00:40:10 UTC
I'm not usually one for the Kaga/Tsutsui pairing, but I really like it here - it was nice to see Kaga being less agressive than usually, while still completely IC :)

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