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May 05, 2008 00:46

FIVE MEN WAYA NEVER LOVED (AND ONE HE ALWAYS WOULD)

by daisy_chan
[pivot] Five Men Waya Never Loved (And One He Always Would) )

sub: daisyface, round 005

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anonymous May 6 2008, 12:54:20 UTC
heh, i like how accepted and normal male relationships are in this go world. waya as the player type works in some way - i think i like how he's not fooling himself, and he knows that his "substitutes" aren't working for him.

nice ending.

-C. Fairy

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daisy_chan February 10 2009, 03:21:34 UTC
Thanks. I think I prefer the normalcy to the dramalama that many authors approach. For all of its traditional elements, the God world seems pretty accepting. Then again, maybe we're at a point where Touya Akira can do whatever he wants and no one would dare say a word against him >D

Thanks for the comment!

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anonymous May 6 2008, 18:48:15 UTC
Oh my God, I absolutely adore this fic and your narrative voice that exudes Waya-ness. I love the first line of this fic, how it states something that should mean so much in such a straightforward and absolutely casual way, in a tone that feels as if that sentence might just be about the weather. I love that even though Waya sleeps with a different man in each scene, thoughts of Isumi are ineludible and remain a constant throughout the fic, up until the moment when Yang Hai tells Waya the other side of the story. And I love the last line, because it squishes my heart in so many beautiful ways that I can't help but smile. I can't wait until reveals are up so I can properly stalk you. Thank you for writing this, I loved it <3

[greg]

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daisy_chan February 10 2009, 03:28:18 UTC
haha, sorry the delay in replying to this, but please feel free to stalk away. I've just achived a new version of this piece (because grammar is my friend, I swear) on my writing comm, so feel free to enjoy it there as well.

Thank you so much for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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anonymous May 7 2008, 01:30:08 UTC
It's nice to thing that after so many mishaps, Waya may still find his happy ending. This was a lovely set of vignettes. :)

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daisy_chan February 10 2009, 03:31:12 UTC
Not to be utterly corny, but I like to think we all find some range of happy ending eventually. Hard to believe in the times we live in, but it's a nice thought at least. ^^

Thanks~!

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issen4 May 7 2008, 09:32:17 UTC
Oh, Waya. You've described the way he self-destructs very effectively.

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daisy_chan February 10 2009, 03:34:02 UTC
Thanks! ^^ He does like to pull his future apart by his own hands, doesn't he?

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ramble_corner May 7 2008, 15:40:08 UTC
Waya oh Waya
Love the way how you cycled thru this and yet managed to pair Waya up with Isumi XD

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daisy_chan February 10 2009, 03:32:10 UTC
haha, thanks. Isumi would have been very put out if he hadn't gotten his turn.

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