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Reborn Drabble (Hakama Love)

Jun 29, 2008 23:19

Title: Hakama Love
Fandom: Katekyou Hitman Reborn!
Pairing: 8059
Rating: R
Notes: written for the 8059challenge prompt 92 (A fitting room, cosplay store). I don't feel I described the claustrophobic feeling of the fitting room enough, and focused on the stupid hakama pants (because I'm wearing a pair in a couple of days). They are really hard to figure ( Read more... )

8059 fic, fanfic, reborn, reborn fic, 8059

Comments 34

bunniblu June 30 2008, 07:08:04 UTC

>//////<
Much love for you!
It was just so...O////////O
I dun know how to describe it without blushing!
8D

ansibs June 30 2008, 07:24:07 UTC

Hahahaha thanks for reading!

ch1zuru June 30 2008, 07:08:29 UTC

IT'S MIDNIGHT ALREADY AND I'M SORRY I CAN'T BE ANY MORE COHERENT BUT OMFG THAT WAS AMAZING <333333333

ansibs June 30 2008, 07:26:45 UTC

*b-blush* It was NOT amazing! Damn you guys are fast...

saxon_dogs June 30 2008, 07:25:07 UTC

I was so excited to read this; i think my head exploded into fireworks. It was awesome! ANd hot! And argh the UST diving straight into RST! That pretty much hit all my favorites. Much love.

ansibs June 30 2008, 07:29:59 UTC

I meant to keep it short, but it like, dragged for 2000+ words cuz I couldn't bear to leave it UST. Glad you liked!

binni June 30 2008, 07:33:32 UTC

AUGH. HOW DO YOU PULL OFF SUCH AMAZING STUFF? SRSLY. Oh, this was greaaaaaat, and I loved the ending!!! X3

ansibs June 30 2008, 18:11:00 UTC

As I was saying to ch1zuru, it was NOT amazing... I went back over it this morning and realized there were like a million things wrong with it. *stabs self*

>.< Glad somebody liked the ending. I thought it was rather too much sap in one place, but...*weak laughter* Thanks for reading!

swn_2gthr_wrng June 30 2008, 20:25:39 UTC

Aww,wow. This was great. Ah ha, I couldn't get over how it was in a change room either. >.> Lol, I have to say, my fav line:
Does this not sound like the setup for a very bad porno? XD
Also, if you're still looking, I'd be glad to be a beta. ^_^;

ansibs June 30 2008, 22:47:38 UTC

(what, it did sound like the line of a very bad porno...)

OMFG YES. A beta who's actually in my fandom...thank god. Er, I can do the same for you, if you'd like, so we can beta each other's stuff. IM...? I'll be MIA most of this week but next week I should be on more.

Yoroshiku onegaishimasu~