Reborn Drabble (Hakama Love)

Jun 29, 2008 23:19

Title: Hakama Love
Fandom: Katekyou Hitman Reborn!
Pairing: 8059
Rating: R
Notes: written for the 8059challenge prompt 92 (A fitting room, cosplay store). I don't feel I described the claustrophobic feeling of the fitting room enough, and focused on the stupid hakama pants (because I'm wearing a pair in a couple of days). They are really hard to figure ( Read more... )

8059 fic, fanfic, reborn, reborn fic, 8059

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dtn July 1 2008, 01:37:57 UTC
I'd imagine the security guards who have to view these changing rooms videos would get a kick out of their little show. XD *is shot*

I reaaaally loved reading this, it was totally hot ♥. I would try to comment without sounding much of an idiot but that's a task I seriously cannot do. X'D

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ansibs July 1 2008, 06:02:39 UTC
XDDDD Actually, that's pretty good omake material, so here goes:

Bel was on his third cup of cup ramen (courtesy of "Varia hospitality", stolen from the mansion's pantry) when Squalo swung into the room, silver hair fluttering behind him like wings. He took a moment to peer through his bangs, smiling as sympathetically as was possible for him at the look on the other's face. It spelled a continuation of the ever-continual struggle these days, as many of the cases now went to the Vongola Seven: the ultimate inner conflict of "bored" or "not bored ( ... )

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ansibs July 1 2008, 06:05:08 UTC
A part of him was a little horrified at their display - they were youngsters, practically a decade younger, yet he thought the katana-brat could have found a better place to corner and make out - the other part of him was a little thrilled at this prime chance at blackmail that had fallen so unexpectedly into his lap. A glance at Bel told him the other was thinking the same, if those sniggers were anything to go by. Turning back to the screen, he watched as the two struggled against each other, the bomber's fingers clawing down the other's back to snag on the lip of the other's kimono, then sliding down inside the fabric's confines. There was a moment when the katana-brat lifted his head and moaned - he could see it from the screen, though he couldn't hear it, but that blissful expression couldn't be anything but - that Squalo thought he was getting a little tight in his pants at the display, but the part of him that screamed "DECADE OLDER, YOU ARE!!" kept him in check ( ... )

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dtn July 1 2008, 23:02:44 UTC
♥___♥

EPIC WIN!! This was an awesome omake, I'm glad I make random comments XD (How much ramen can one guy eat anyways? XD)

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ansibs July 1 2008, 06:07:41 UTC
Detail? What detail? This was pretty much me half-ranting about how hard hakama pants are to put on - and they are hard. For me, that is.

XDDD Would love to see Yamamoto in a rockish outfit, as uncharacteristic as it might be. Thanks for reading!

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shaorankun July 1 2008, 03:30:21 UTC
@^#%@^#@&*#%@&*
THAT WAS HOT
XD YOU AWESOME THING

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ansibs July 1 2008, 06:07:56 UTC
:DDD Glad you liked!

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marionetteblue3 July 7 2008, 11:44:57 UTC
@.@ YAY!!! Good old yamamoto x Gokudera <3

About the Beta, I would be willing =33 But would you mind being my beta? *hasn't been bothered to get one until now*

I don't know why you would bother, though xD Your writing is perfect!!!!!! WINWINWIN, I SAY XDXD

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ansibs July 9 2008, 20:00:28 UTC
Oh sweetie, my writing is far from perfect. I constantly look over my stuff, spot stupid mistakes, and correct them in hasty embarrassment (while hoping nobody else read close enough to see it). The pairing is just so awesome though, I can't stop writing 8059...

And I would be honored to be your beta. It'd be good practice for both, yeah?

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marionetteblue3 July 10 2008, 00:48:32 UTC
I do that too! Well, I use to anyway. I can't be bothered to look through my work as I've become impossibly lazy, these days. In fact, I don't think I've written anything worthwhile for a LONG time. Yeah, I love this pairing! It's awesome <3

My msn is marionetteblue12@hotmail.com I look forward to working with you.

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jubsx July 24 2008, 00:19:42 UTC
Nicely done. Kimono sex is always hot! =D And you just made it hotter with 8059! =D XD

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ansibs July 24 2008, 02:32:30 UTC
XDDD Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

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