The Right Guy

May 22, 2009 07:14


Title: The Right Guy (oneshot)
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: YunJae
Genre: Romance/Angst
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Yunho meets him by chance while bartending at a gay bar - a teasing, matter-a-fact, enigmatic stranger that quickly becomes a part of his life, whether Yunho is ready for it or not.

A/N: Maybe I'll write a sequel to this? I'm not sure, but I'm ( Read more... )

yunjae, oneshot, romance, angst

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jerryyan May 23 2009, 00:05:01 UTC
please do write a sequel, don't leave us hanging like that, want to know what happens when jae moves to paris and will jae and yunho finally be together, like they should be

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anoukinparis May 23 2009, 02:14:01 UTC
aw, i'm planning on doing so! ^^ thanks for commenting, love~
<3

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_happy_as_rain_ May 23 2009, 00:33:50 UTC
Wow, what a wonderful and original oneshot!! The descriptions and dialogue and emotions all swirling around in this smoke-filled, dimly-lit room. Just, wow.

Yunho wondered what would have happened if the blind date had shown up that night. He wondered if he would have had the chance to talk with the stranger then, if they would have ever crossed paths, if someone else would have ever looked at him like that. He wondered where he lived and what he did and why he never laughed enough. He wondered if he secretly did want a real relationship, if all the running around was needed to cover up that desire, and if he was being serious or not when he said Yunho was his type.I really really love that. I feel as if so much of life is about chance and opportunity--what if this, what if that--wondering about a person you shouldn't or can't have the chance to know... wondering about the lives people lead ( ... )

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anoukinparis May 23 2009, 06:47:56 UTC
akjhsjahsjhaksaghs -flails for a good while-

bb, you're going to give me much too big a head one day xD but i appreciate all the compliments nonetheless, and i'm really, really glad that you liked this! and found it original! originality is a hard thing to come across with fanfics~

i completely agree with what you said about the chances and opportunities in life ^__^ and i WILL make a sequel, partly because of the threats and partly because i want to figure both of them out~ ;D

thanks, dear! <333

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lovelykitten8 May 23 2009, 00:54:22 UTC
oh god when do you not impress me this was amazingly great there better be a part two yunjae in paris my fave lol jae's character is just deliciously tempting lol loved it ^_^

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anoukinparis May 23 2009, 06:50:12 UTC
awwwww 8D thanks so much, chicago buddy! and i know right, i just want to take him home~~ ;D

hope your summer is going well so far! <333

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k_musiclover May 23 2009, 01:17:23 UTC
This fic was so good. I love the way you portrayed Jae and Yunho in the story. I hope you decide to write a sequel.

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anoukinparis May 23 2009, 06:51:30 UTC
awww, thanks so much bb! :D all words of encouragement~!
and i'm glad you liked the story~~

<3

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soulburnt_rei May 23 2009, 02:38:46 UTC
want a sequel want a sequel want a sequel..XD
*runs around waiting*

I don't know how to say it..
It's thick(?) but so worthed..XD
*i'm lack of vocabs*
I still have to open the dictionary to find it coherently with the sentence..lol

thanks for help me improved in English..
and <33 the ficcie~..

YoonHo wasn't straight in my view at all...XDD

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anoukinparis May 23 2009, 06:55:00 UTC
8DDD
ahsjahdsad you're so cute! and excited! yay!
and don't worry about coherency, i never really use it~ ;D glad to help you with your english though, and that you enjoyed the story! makes my heart so happy ^__^

p.s. you're not the only one who thinks that xD; lol

thanks for reading! <3

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soulburnt_rei May 26 2009, 16:05:45 UTC
how cani be cute..?
*scratch my head*
just being honest..XDD
glad if you're happy..^0^

go post it soon..^^

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