The Right Guy

May 22, 2009 07:14


Title: The Right Guy (oneshot)
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: YunJae
Genre: Romance/Angst
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Yunho meets him by chance while bartending at a gay bar - a teasing, matter-a-fact, enigmatic stranger that quickly becomes a part of his life, whether Yunho is ready for it or not.

A/N: Maybe I'll write a sequel to this? I'm not sure, but I'm ( Read more... )

yunjae, oneshot, romance, angst

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_happy_as_rain_ May 23 2009, 00:33:50 UTC
Wow, what a wonderful and original oneshot!! The descriptions and dialogue and emotions all swirling around in this smoke-filled, dimly-lit room. Just, wow.

Yunho wondered what would have happened if the blind date had shown up that night. He wondered if he would have had the chance to talk with the stranger then, if they would have ever crossed paths, if someone else would have ever looked at him like that. He wondered where he lived and what he did and why he never laughed enough. He wondered if he secretly did want a real relationship, if all the running around was needed to cover up that desire, and if he was being serious or not when he said Yunho was his type.

I really really love that. I feel as if so much of life is about chance and opportunity--what if this, what if that--wondering about a person you shouldn't or can't have the chance to know... wondering about the lives people lead.

Beautiful!

I would love it if you continued... don't leave us (and yourself!) behind like Jaejoong does! Figure him out! Perhaps the result will be more interesting than if you had kept us in the dark. :) ♥

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anoukinparis May 23 2009, 06:47:56 UTC
akjhsjahsjhaksaghs -flails for a good while-

bb, you're going to give me much too big a head one day xD but i appreciate all the compliments nonetheless, and i'm really, really glad that you liked this! and found it original! originality is a hard thing to come across with fanfics~

i completely agree with what you said about the chances and opportunities in life ^__^ and i WILL make a sequel, partly because of the threats and partly because i want to figure both of them out~ ;D

thanks, dear! <333

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