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[klutzy_girl]

klutzy_girl

A03
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[klutzy_girl]

We have a lot of fandoms in common so I've come across your fic a bunch of times, and I'm in awe of your prolific-ness (is that a word?).

But your stories often seem rushed, not in the sense of the time you've put into them but in the way the stories themselves are told.

From 'Souvenir', for example:

Since Temperance was still in her first trimester, she and Booth decided to keep the pregnancy a secret for a few more weeks. Just like last time, however, she informed Angela immediately

[klutzy_girl]

Thank you for your honesty! You weren't being harsh at all so don't worry. I've actually noticed that issue myself and I want to fix it so I'm definitely going to edit a few stories I'm currently writing. What you said makes a lot of sense.

Thank you again! That was really helpful.

[klutzy_girl]

you have an unhealthy obsession with babies. get help.