FIC - Dear Diary ~Keigo, Yumichika/Ikkaku ~R

[annieroo2]

Title: Dear Diary
Pairings/Characters: Asano Keigo, Yumichika/Ikkaku
Spoilers: Takes place maybe about a week after chapter 213
Warnings: crack, fluff
Rating: R for language, mentions of yaoi, voyeurism, and masturbation
Word Count: 1377
Prompt: stalk
Written for: week #39 

Comments

[bloodthirstylt]

Hahhaaaaa haven't seen the ep or manga, but damn this fic is funny. Poor Keigo.

[annieroo2]

Hehe thanks! Though I kind of think Keigo was lucky. ;)

I really appreciate you reading this especially since you're not caught up on Bleach.

*hugs* sweetie!

[bloodthirstylt]

Yeah, actually he is. *giggles*

[hu3long2]

Oh... this is so funny! I love how you have Keigo's voice-- desperate, perverted, disbelieving but forced to believe and just funny, especially his response to the whole Yumi tops Ikkaku thing, and then to Ichigo/Ishida-- "if Ichigo can be gay anybody can, so why not me?"

All the little details are terrific, like how he needs to go to the corner store, or how he gets dessert to celebrate his first live porno, and settling down to listen to the guys now he knows how hot they can be...

Love how he appreciates the romance and beauty of it all, but it always gets back to "and how can he get some for himself?"

Feel really sorry for his diary, because he gives waaaay too much information to it! But it's wonderful as the diary of a perv with teenage hormones!

[annieroo2]

Yeah! What a lovely review. I am so happy Keigo's voice sounded like a crazy, hormonal teenager. And that you liked the little tidbits of Keigo's life I put in just tickled me.

I wanted him to sound like a real teenager even though his life is far from normal. So thanks for that.

Even though it's not common for a guy to keep a diary I wanted Keigo's experience to be unique enough that he'd have to tell someone. XD

Thanks for reading and taking the time to tell me what you liked. I appreciate it greatly. :D

[2metaldog]

I liked this. It was funny and I think you got the confused horniness of a teenager right. Poor Keigo. he never even considered that he might be bi, did he?

[annieroo2]

\o/ I'm so happy I made Keigo's teenage boy's mind seem right. I wanted that

*laughs* I'm pretty sure Keigo is just not self aware enough to understand he could be bi. XD Thankfully akuni helped me keep him from being too self aware so it was more believable.

Thank you so much for reading this, I really appreciate you taking the time to leave such nice remarks, too. :D

I lol'd

[jamminbison]

Best reasoning to get dessert ever.

Fucking loved it. Lawl all over the place.

Re: I lol'd

[annieroo2]

*laughs* Well I certainly would have been celebrating such a lovely sight. XD

I'm so happy I could make you laugh. Your comments have made me very happy. So thanks for that. :D

Re: I lol'd

[xxlanaxx]

dude your icon rules!

[mitsu_syusuke]

this is funny!
Fuck, I really need to stop sounding like a girl!
who know keigo is a closet fangirl! err, i mean fanboi..XXDD

[annieroo2]

Hehe I'm so happy you liked this. Keigo as a closet fanboi just tickles me. What a great observation.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to let me know you liked it. :D