Comments | annieroo2: FIC - The Pleasure of Pain ~Yoruichi, Urahara NC17

annieroo2

FIC - The Pleasure of Pain ~Yoruichi, Urahara NC17

Jul 11, 2008 19:31

Title: The Pleasure of Pain
Pairings/Characters: Shihōin Yoruichi and Urahara Kisuke
Spoilers: none
Warnings: PWP, blood play, bondage, anal, pegging and probably other objectionable sex practices. :D
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2715
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nc17, bdsm, yoruichi, #26, contest-entry, bleach, urahara

Comments 21

anonymous July 14 2008, 01:11:07 UTC

woot Smut! *nosebleeds* I love this pairing Any chance for a sequal?

annieroo2 July 14 2008, 05:59:28 UTC

LOL!! Yeah, I'm so happy you liked the smut.

As for a sequel, maybe Yoruichi will be generous in the future and let Kisuke pretend to be in charge. I haven't had any luck with follow up fics as yet, but I'll keep trying; maybe this will be the one that works. ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

yaoi_4dd1ct July 14 2008, 08:11:24 UTC

Wow. Just. . . wow. Ouch. That *hurt*! Lovely lovely lemon delight! I love the humor at the end, but especially the tension and lack of release all throughout the fic, and then BAM at the end. Beautifully done smut!

annieroo2 July 14 2008, 16:33:16 UTC

0.o Wow! Thank you so much. Being my first stab at smut, I did not honestly expect to get compliments, but I am so flattered you liked it.

Hurt in a good way though, right? LOL! I'm as ecstatic you liked the humor, because even though it was minimal, it was my first attempt as well.

I imagine Yoruichi is all about delayed gratification at least for her partner. ;)

Thank you so very much for reading and stopping to take the time to comment as well. :D

yawns_widely July 14 2008, 15:32:01 UTC

Ok, racks brain to find meaningful commentary only to fail. It goes without saying that I love this ♥ Yoruichi has just enough balls to get away with this authentically, and the motive is really cute. She is such a maneater and so confident and assertive. You should write more of these two. Any excuse for bdsm eh?

This was hot, and the interraction between them was believable.

I am also miffed that you credit me, as I really altered very little. This baby is your own.

LOL, btw I love your current music because it happens to be my favourite :D

annieroo2 July 14 2008, 18:21:31 UTC

Pfft! Meaningful commentary is overrated. ;D Seriously I am so excited whenever I get any comments at all. :P I just think the things that interest me to write do not interest as many people to read. LOL ( ... )

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annieroo2 October 11 2008, 04:56:08 UTC

Hehe! Thanks! I just can't see Yoruichi being anything but dominant, to... well anyone. XD

WOW!! A fangirl AND a memories. Damn, now that's what I call a fabulous review.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. You rock! :D

hoooooot damn! anonymous January 9 2009, 07:46:22 UTC

all I can say is hot damn...I was reading it and looking for my gf at the same time LMAO!!! This shit was excellent..I love the pairing of Kisuke and Yoruichi after all I;m white and my gf is black so lol. Plus the mistake Kisuke made was hilarious!!

Re: hoooooot damn! annieroo2 January 15 2009, 00:24:30 UTC

Hello anonymous. I wish you had logged in so I could thank you properly.

I'm happy you enjoyed my story and not only found it hot but funny as well. I think Kisuke and Yoruichi are very kinky best friends and I love them together as well.

I wish you and your girlfriend supreme happiness and freedom from the idiots in the world.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :D