FIC - The Pleasure of Pain ~Yoruichi, Urahara NC17

[annieroo2]

Title: The Pleasure of Pain
Pairings/Characters: Shihōin Yoruichi and Urahara Kisuke
Spoilers: none
Warnings: PWP, blood play, bondage, anal, pegging and probably other objectionable sex practices. :D
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2715
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Comments

[annieroo2]

Pfft! Meaningful commentary is overrated. ;D Seriously I am so excited whenever I get any comments at all. :P I just think the things that interest me to write do not interest as many people to read. LOL!

Maneater is such a great description of Yoruichi and it's exactly the way I've always seen her. Teasing Ichigo with her hot body, eating nearly naked at Urahara shouten and then teasing chibi Byakuya by stealing his hair tie.

These are the things she shows to the world, so I figured something kinkier and more fun was in order with Kisuke at her mercy. Since Urahara has a female zanpakutou, I figure he's pretty used to being abused by strong women. XD

I'm actually astonished that no one has bitched at me about my Kisuke characterization. I was sure someone would complain he was OOC or too submissive. I rarely see Urahara smut where he bottoms, but in my mind no one tops Yoruichi.

LOL!! Yeah, that's my frequent music choice. ;) I get things done better and faster when it's quiet. I can see where you would appreciate that a great deal as well. :)

Sweetie I have to credit you. Without your help this would have been less readable and certainly much less coherent without the changes you suggested.

More of these 2? Maybe...? I don't know, I just haven't had any luck with sequel's. Although I have to admit as much fun as these 2 were to write I think I'd at least like to try again.

As always your lovely remarks keep me going and make me believe I can write something readable.

Hugs and love :D