Comments | annieroo2: FIC - The Pleasure of Pain ~Yoruichi, Urahara NC17

annieroo2

FIC - The Pleasure of Pain ~Yoruichi, Urahara NC17

Jul 11, 2008 19:31

Title: The Pleasure of Pain
Pairings/Characters: Shihōin Yoruichi and Urahara Kisuke
Spoilers: none
Warnings: PWP, blood play, bondage, anal, pegging and probably other objectionable sex practices. :D
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2715
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nc17, bdsm, yoruichi, #26, contest-entry, bleach, urahara

Comments 21

bluefox_chan July 12 2008, 03:12:38 UTC

LOL! i loved this! I loved how you got a good view of Yoruichi though his (pervy) eyes!

Thx for sharing!
Toodles!
Bluefox

annieroo2 July 12 2008, 23:38:27 UTC

LOL!! I'm so glad you liked this. I love Yoruichi and Urahara and more than anything this was just fun to write.

Thanks for reading and taking time to comment!

xshelaghx July 13 2008, 00:45:44 UTC

heehee this was great! Love Yoruichi!

"He screamed like a little girl and passed out." LMAO

annieroo2 July 13 2008, 03:31:15 UTC

Hehehe! Thanks. It was very fun to write. Yeah it's a littlecracky, but then so are both Kisuke and Yoruichi under the right circumstances. :D

I'm so happy you liked it. I got such a kick out of your response.

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment. :D

ceres_wish July 13 2008, 07:06:06 UTC

Oh gosh, this is so hot!!!! *getting nosebleed* This is so Yoruichi is a perverse way! Poor Kisuke!

Well done writing this!! And the last line is a total win ^^

annieroo2 July 14 2008, 05:37:30 UTC

LOL!! Thanks.

I've always imagined Yoruichi and Kisuke would have a pretty kinky relationship. And since I can't ever see anyone topping Yoruichi, she gets to be seme here. :D

I really like that last line too. This was so much fun to write, I'm glad you enjoyed it too.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. :)

vayshti July 13 2008, 11:55:27 UTC

OMG! Smut! S&M Play!

The details are great, and the reason why was hilarious.

annieroo2 July 14 2008, 05:47:38 UTC

LOL! Yeah someone actually liked my reason!

Want to know something really sad? The whole story started with the spoiled milk and just sort of spiraled out of control.

This was actually my very first smut fic, so the fact that you liked the details was pretty ego boosting. It's not on par with most of the smut I read, but it sure was damn fun to write.

Thanks for reading and commenting. Comments are love. :D

vayshti July 15 2008, 09:20:02 UTC

That's a lot of spiralling to get from milk to punishment!sex XD.

But it is fun when that happens - not surprised you enjoyed writing this.

Smut is hard. I usually do a fair bit of hand waving, and glossing over bits to cover up the fact I'm not great in writing detail without resorting to cliche.

The few times I have tried to give blow by blow descriptions (literally in one case) it felt quite mechanical.

SO yeah, there's a lot of respect because you were able to avoid both extremes, even more so for your first smuttage (which I was surprised to see!)

annieroo2 July 15 2008, 15:26:44 UTC

LOL Yeah, I think sometimes there are serious issues with the way my mind works. I just wondered what Yoruichi would do to Kisuke if she was waiting for him to come home with milk only to find out he bought an expired version and thus this was born. Yeah totally not normal. 0.o ( ... )

beautifvl_flaw July 13 2008, 19:46:35 UTC

Oh fantastic! This fic was a lot of fun to read. Very hot (I never realised I was into this until now, but looks like I am), and with some giggles in there too. I really loved Kisuke's attempts at control and how they didn't always go as planned.

annieroo2 July 14 2008, 05:54:07 UTC

Yeah! I'm so happy it was fun to read, because it was super fun to write.

It's really great you found it hot and that you could expand your interests from reading it as well. :D

But it makes me even more excited that you giggled.

Kisuke was never going to have control no matter what he thought, because in my eyes no one tops Yoruichi. ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)