Fic: Every Chance, James/Sirius NC-17

[anneline]

Title: Every Chance
Pairing: James/Sirius
Rating: Hard R, possibly NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Warnings: Fisting. Agnst. Loose POV.
Summary: In Azkaban, Sirius tries not to remember James...
Thanks to summerborn and onewavebreaks for the beta. All errors and awkwardness are the result of my ignoring them.

Comments

[totheseaside]

I love that last line! (*giggles* It was minee too!) I really did enjoy working on this fic with you, even though you did ignore me! *pulls whip out from inside of pants* Seriously, it was hard work because this thing was so long and I don't really like doing Azkaban fics, but the dialogue was superb and you really seemed to understand and grasp James and Sirius's dynamic.

I look forward to beta-ing your next fic.

[totheseaside]

I like how I'm a beta but can't spell the word 'mine' in a comment to my author's fic on which I beta-ed. *is total dork*

[anneline]

Hee! Thanks again for all your help.

[lilacsigil]

Arrgh! Help! Your fics suck me in like a whirlpool, and then I wish I could get out, but it's too late! Too late!

This is horrific, and frighteningly in character. I'm not used to the horror coming from within, not in HP fandom where the horror is so often coming from the outside. The Sirius/James relationship made so much damn sense, and it's one of the best reasons for not choosing Remus as Secret Keeper that I have read. And the end. Oh.

You are the mistress of misdirection. I would like to say I'll never trust your fic again, but you know I will. Probably I enjoy it.

[anneline]

Yes, this was a particularly depressing bunny that crawled into my head. Thank you for reading. I'm glad you found it compelling if horrifying. I'll try to make my next story more cheerful, but I can't make any guarantees.

[st_aurafina]

Oh, that's terrifying, and so sad, and can Sirius never let go of anything? I love the insidious trade-system at Azkaban, and the way the Dementors are so ravenous for the good thoughts.

[anneline]

Thank you. Azkaban's hard to write about. It's hard to imagine what it was like there.

[merely_a_facade]

I love the beginning, and especially the ending. The beginning was incredibly adorable!

Sirius frowned. "I don't want to be your friend." He snatched back the hairball. "I don't like you anymore. You make things difficult."

"Oh, all right," James said. "You can have blue."

8D Sounds like Sirius, all right. ^^;

Also love the little thing about being sandwiched between Rodolphus & 'Bella. *wonders about the tapping code* XD

And the last line - yay!

I kept on looking for hints of Remus/Sirius *g* Can't help it. XD

Absolutely spiffers! Love your writing.

[anneline]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. The beginning was fun. I love writing little kids.

[hpuckle]

Oh this was so beautiful and heartbreaking. Loved it!

xxx