Title: Butcher (5/7)
Fandom: Megamind
Rating: M
Warning: noncon, violence (this chapter!)
Disclaimer: If I owned it, the gay would be way more obvious.
Summary: There's a murderer loose in Metro City, and his victims have a connection.
Note: So sorry about the wait. Once you finish reading this chapter, I think you'll be able to understand a bit of
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Just to warn you, if you were looking for a light and fluffy ending where they fix everything before the end of the episode. Well. Might not wanna read this one. :)
If, however, a little touch of fridge horror is your cup of tea, then you'll LOVE chapter seven! :D
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No, seriously though. This is darkfic through and through.
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...am I a bad person for laughing at the brain-bot calling Metro Man at the end, after all that darkness? :P
Also, I love your tags for your journal, they made me LOL too. XD
Don't keep us in suspense too long! Pretty please?
<3 Emma
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But no, see I was writing the phone call like "I feel like this is an unnecessary amount of mood whiplash. I probably should make it less lulzy..." I get a bit weirdly giddy and lulzy when I write really dark stuff, 'cause I just love it so much, and black humor ends up in there at odd points. xD
And re: tags, I figure if you're gonna look for something in my journal you might as well have fun about it, right?
/IIII oh. Obviously I should stop promising how soon things will be written, huh? I have a general idea where the next chapter will go, and I'm partway through, and I'm trying to say that I don't get to go grab a burger for dinner until the chapter's finished, but I doubt that'll last. I'm doing my best to reign in my ADD writing-avoiding tendencies though. :D
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I <3 black humor, it makes me happy! :D <3
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Seems though that it's actually some sort of sleepwalking thing, and I'm wondering if Megamind hasn't been getting all the vitamins and minerals he needs to be normal on this world.
Last guess: He's been programmed by someone in the Gaol. Always a possibility, right?
This is awesome, I look forward to seeing how you set the next bit. Keep going! We neeeeed you to keep writing!
You've really caught me up in the story. [bouncebouncebounce]
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/re: chapter four comment, I can't really speak for Anglicans elsewhere, but actually Episcopalians (American Anglicans), of which I used to be one, tend to be sane, polite, tolerant, and non-crazy. Obviously this doesn't apply to ALL Episcopalians, but it sounds like you've run into some bad apples. :/
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I will never groan at you. You'll have to do a LOT to make me groan at you. You are awesome and exciting and hilarious. WRITE ME MORE FIC GORGEOUS GIRL.
On the other comment:
Never met anyone who CALLED themselves Episcopalian, so I dunno there, but the Aussie Anglicans were incredibly insulted by the "E" word, and wouldn't accept any religious debate at all. Or any debate. They were right, and that was it. I've been told several times that I shall burn in hell, and more rude things as well. Also they were right wing politically, so we sort of didn't even slightly get along XD Perhaps they're different in America. I have no idea.
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/Oh, yeah. Most Episcopalians I know are moderate or liberal. The far-right niche is filled by other religious groups around here, which I won't enumerate lest any readers think I'm stereotyping them.
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Oh, Roxanne! Oh NO! I actually cringed away from the screen reading about what was happening to her. It was horrendous, appalling and terrifying. Quite frankly, I don't see her ever recovering from this. I see her never, EVER forgiving Megamind for this. Even if it IS a mental disorder that's driving Megamind to these actions... even if medication might help him someday. I don't see her forgiving him for this, ever!
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BONUS: Look back all the way to chapter one.
The man the papers would soon name the Metro City Butcher grinned wickedly in the near-dark room, face blue in the light of his computer.
Blue. I've been telling you all alooooong~
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erm... I keep using words like 'explicit' and 'obvious' because I'm slightly concerned that I might actually be a smidgen more demented than the average reader over here. ONLY a SMIDGEN!!!
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